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Candle's sacrifice !

Updated on June 5, 2012
wiping out darkness
wiping out darkness
lighting the lives !
lighting the lives !
festive Light !
festive Light !
light all over!
light all over!
light for the happiness!
light for the happiness!



Candle burns quite

bit by bit, every night

she ends up her life

for great cause, right !

she lives for others

for others she dies

she sacrifices her life

in spreading out light

soaked up in darkness

the world she brights

descented for the cause

God has given us spirit

dare for, hardly a few

all meagerly but quit .

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      Richard J ONeill 5 years ago from Bangkok, Thailand

      Interesting picture you have painted with this poem, Shara63.

      I enjoyed it. Why don't you write more poems?

      I'd come and read them. I love poetry especially original poetry.

      Take care. Rich

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      thankyou Richawriter for your incouraging words..i wud really love if my readers as a critic comment here to give me a scope to improve my writing...hope you like my other poems too..Thankyou ones again!

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      Richard J ONeill 5 years ago from Bangkok, Thailand

      Hey Shara63.

      If you write more, I promise I will come and tell you what I think of your work so that you my improve your writing.

      Peace Shara and keep on writing! :)

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      I love scented candles in my bathroom after a very stressful shift

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      i love scented candles too!!!

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      thankyou tobusiness & unknown spy. yes, aroma therapy through scented candles is gud in releasing stress.

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      Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

      I think the flame of a candle is one of the most soothing sights to see, wonderful poem, nell

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      and it brightens the soul & mind as well...thankyou Nell that you take the time and effort to read my poem, it really gives power to my words!

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      Love your candles in your pics and I enjoyed your poem.There is something about a nice scented candle in a room that makes everything in life o.k.

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      DreamOn, thanks for enjoying my poem and your beautiful insight too!

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      50 Caliber 4 years ago from Arizona

      Shara63, i so liked this poem of candles, I've found from religion to religion they are burnt for many reasons, I burn them for the light and relaxation. Some times I find an aroma I like and will take that one home to enjoy late at night and relax to the smell and flicker.

      You asked for criticism of your work, I don't believe there is a person worthy to criticize the of ones heart as poetry often is, and I feel this one was perfect, Thank you for letting me read it,

      Peace Mi Amiga,

      50/ Dusty

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      Hi 50 Caliber, i've no words to thank you......your mere presence in this place worths, and your comments like the Best Accolade added to my achievements, i'm really feeling obliged!.... thankyou so much Sir!!

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      Jaggedfrost 4 years ago

      Little light

      who spreads the glow

      take heart in what you write

      even when the wick is low

      back will come

      more to you

      a richer wax

      that burns brighter too.

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Love your candles and a very happy new year 2013, God bless.

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      Thankyou Jaggedfrost...for reading and my poem and commenting upon so beautifully!

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      Thankyou girishpuri for liking the candles & your beautiful wishes...A very Happy New year to you & your family too!

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      May this year be especially good to you.You have once again taken me on a journey.I haven't been lighting candles around the house lately.Just didn't notice I have gotten out of the habit.Tonight I lit many and enjoyed it so much.When I growing up my mother always had a candle burning and the beautiful smells and the flicker of light always made her home extra special.Thanx for the great memories and making my day.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      A woman's work is never done.. we love and live and work and Sacrifice .. we do it because we do love.. a wonderful poem.. many blessings to you and your wonderful writing..

      Debbie

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