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Captured in Your Dear Green Eyes- A Love Poem

Updated on February 15, 2013

A kiss that lasts forever.

You push me to see tomorrow.  You are my heart.  I love you
You push me to see tomorrow. You are my heart. I love you | Source

When you know something means the world to you, show it.

Me and the love of my life, hope this makes you smile sweetheart
Me and the love of my life, hope this makes you smile sweetheart

Title: Captured in Your Dear Green Eyes

It's been days and I need you
It seems like its been ages since we touched
The memories feel like yesterday
And by the time I see you ill wish it was

Cause every night we sit apart
I spend it with a broken heart
Cause the only time I feel whole
Is together; linked at the soul

You can see right through me
You hold the key inside
For every chest of broken time
Came a tear, and a chance to find
Cause every tear meant that I loved you
So I made the seven seas
Cause without you baby
There is nowhere for one like me

Cause I'd sacrifice anything you see
To see the glimmer of your smile
Cause that second pure and true
You'd know just how I love you
Cause the crevice once inside
Filled itself in awe
I remember it like yesterday
Leaves had turned: first days of fall

And within the change
Of nature and its purity
Came the truth of knowing
You are the future holding me
Cause in this crystal ball
Of jaded dreams and pitted skies
Came the whisper of true love
Captured in your dear green eyes

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      Cut The Bullshit 4 years ago from All Over

      Nice poem.. Wishing you guys many more years of blessings and happiness

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      Sean 4 years ago from PA

      Thank you very much, I'm glad you both enjoyed this =)

      If you can feel it, mission accomplished. If you can picture it, even better :) Hope it gave a good feeling and something to start the day off the right way.

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      Cathy Nerujen 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      So fluid and free in your words... like water falling on leaves... Beautiful writing.

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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      Your words reflect your love and happiness with the person you are with now. Beautiful poem and lovely couple. Best wishes to you!

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      Sean 4 years ago from PA

      Thank you very much :) And yeah I feel love is the most powerful force because with it comes a power of support nothing else can grant and without it can leave you completely stranded and feeling empty.

      I've found through the years it's best to stick by your values and accept them for what they are, some people simply fear being themselves, which is the very definition of insecurity...doesn't make them weak, simply makes them afraid. It's good to simply be aware of who and what makes us tick, and just showing it without regret or remorse, but just total acceptance for what we've decided to be.

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      Chris Achilleos 4 years ago

      An other beautiful poem i enjoyed reading this from start to end. I can totally relate to your poem. I agree with you that when something means the world to us we should show it, no need to keep our feelings inside, we should express how we feel each passing day. For me love is the most powerful force in the world and love sometimes needs sacrifices.

      Thanks for sharing this amazing poem, I am looking forward to reading more of your work! Voted up, beautiful and definitely sharing :)

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      Sean 4 years ago from PA

      Colin- I feel that poetry of all nature is at its best when you are feeling that feeling, whether it be the recognition of the love and special bonds you have, or the feeling of reflection on lonely and hard times, to me its when you put yourself in that place, in that memory and moment, and you put the words onto paper or typed into a document, the outcome is the art of 'poetry' as poet of the year I have a lot to learn from you, each time I read from your work I learn, and there is never a moment where there won't be something new to consider to enhance a writing style.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      I can 'see' why you can write 'love' poetry when you have a muse and a best friend as lovely as your wife which leads to me wonder Sean.

      Do you think a writer can write such love poetry if he is not in love at the moment? Can he write from memory or from imagination or does it help to have that 'feeling' present in the moment in which you are writing? Either way I am sure every man at the Hub could learn from you as a writer/poet and also envy you as well for finding the love of your life. God bless both of you. lake erie time 8:38pm

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      Sean 4 years ago from PA

      Thank you siberian, as always a pleasure to hear from you

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      Eric T. Shortridge 4 years ago from MidWest

      Wow... feels like you captured the essence of everything you wanted to say... and more... beautiful ink... I dig it

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      Sean 4 years ago from PA

      Thank you I appreciate it. She hasn't read this yet its waiting as a surprise for her :)

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      Susan Zutautas 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Beautiful poem and such a beautiful wife.