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Caramel Coated Dream Girl

Updated on October 16, 2011

Caramel Coated Dream Girl

It was all in his head,

a dream played out so well,

she tossed and turned in her bed

not knowing if he were alive or dead

she hates what he was doing to her

his dream girl, took on more that she bargain for,

knowingly, that loving someone again

is nothing more than walking the plank of shame

where tension builds,

as her chest sporadically rise and fall

whenever, he didn't return her called

In her mind, she though of the sailor man

abroad a pirate ship, with his dirt stain bandanana

whiskey and rum on his breath

as he sang the redemption songs,

into wee hours of the morning,

as the vibration speed across the ocean and trigger her emotion

like sudden volcanoes eruption.

The unsteady plank move under her feet

so, were mixed feeling of love, loneliness and craziness havoc

her heart.

Tonight, the caramel coated dream girl

walked the plank for the first time

she struggles to free herself from her new

found lifestyle , it was unhealthy

The sailorman were three thousand mile away

her needs weren't met

Amazing thought! that God in flesh

would take my place and bear my sin;

that I a guilty death-doomed soul,

eternal life might win,

I suffered in silent, as I pulled the cover over my head

A new love is temporary solution to ease a broken heart

however, never clip the wings of a bird or a freedom fighter,

To cage them is unnatural and so difficult,

Freedom to roam, is in their blood.

Let this be a dream of a lesson well taught,

of love that flow of deep gratitude rather

than our love likes and dislikes.

I must find happiness on my own.

Let this be only a dream.


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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      Thank you Maddot .. a litle late in thanking you

      but do accept

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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      thank u writer 20

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      Joyce Haragsim 6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Great wonderful poem. up/some. This must have been a long dream.

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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      maddot, sometimes throughtout our life , we wish that we had a magic wang, just to make everything perfect,

      however, a wish that is impossible, however, we do not really need a wish, we just have to go deep within,

      and take control of certain situation, here the narrator

      telling a story of what love and falling in love, can do to to person soul.... of mix emotion, love, sorrow, happiness, thank you for commenting.

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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      Majadez both dream and a nightmare, of lossing herself

      the narrator ) into a fairytale world...

      good to see you..and

      One love


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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      Mikeq107 as you know i really dig deep into my soul

      (soulsearching) and unliked elastic rubber band it snap back

      (:) Ouch! ..

      thank you for comment, my hubber friend.

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      maddot 6 years ago from Northern NSW, Australia

      Wow! Really it!

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      Maja Dezulovic 6 years ago from Johannesburg, South Africa

      A dream or a nightmare? Scary, but I enjoyed this!

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      mikeq107 6 years ago

      Annie ;0)

      That is so powerful, so strong..I have to rush out this am ..but will reread when I return..I want to turn it heart feels your pain ...but also Gods joy for his daughter

      Love in Him !!!

      Mike :0)