ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

Casted Away

Updated on March 29, 2011
Source

 

I casted it all away

Down under my feet it lay

No room for resurrection

Just a poor lost reflection

 

I stand on top this mountain

I drink of a virtuous fountain

A new set of reflectors

Fastened upon this life sector

 

It floats in the sands of the ocean

No longer causing commotion

It rides the waves of the deep blue

Into the highs with wings it flew

 

Upon the creator will calls

A cleanse of purity falls

No explanations condoned

Contradictory casted and disowned

 

A heart untarnished or stained

Free it stands alone unchained

A breath of clean air inhaled

Happiness and bliss unveiled

 

 

bellawritter23(copyright)2011

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • apache13 profile image

      Timothy C. Dove 6 years ago from Belleville AR.

      Hey what's going on here? Did my favorite poet quit or something?:( Nice poem though,as always. :)

    • DeBorrah K. Ogans profile image

      DeBorrah K Ogans 6 years ago

      Bellawritter, BEAUTIFUL expression of Freedom and Acceptance! Thank You for sharing, IN HIS Love, Grace, Joy, Peace & Blessings!

    • Mentalist acer profile image

      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      A awesome poem from my favorite fellow castaway,Bella.;)

    • tnderhrt23 profile image

      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Ahhhh! Movin on! Well expressed, as always!

      "A heart untarnished or stained

      Free it stands alone unchained

      A breath of clean air inhaled

      Happiness and bliss unveiled "

    • bellawritter23 profile image
      Author

      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Tim, No I deleted all my old hubs. I am inthe process of publishing so I had to remove them from the hubs :( so time to create new ones :)

      Deborah, Thank you yes In his love I live and with his love I write thank you!!

      Acer, Awwww you are too sweet :)

      Tnder, Yes moving on out with the old in with the new.

      smiles :)

      bella

    • acaetnna profile image

      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Well this is awesome and I am so pleased I managed to read your old ones before you moved them away!

    • bellawritter23 profile image
      Author

      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Ace, I removed them all it was the hardest thing I've done :( My page so empty but it gives me a fresh start and a new begining. Thanks dear friend

      smiles :)

      bella

    • bbnix profile image

      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Do you feel the light breeze, Bella. It is for a deep sigh. Like the majestic sea soarers, we have flown so high. I stand here, your dear friend, and wish you great strength to no end, yet can't help but a sense of loss for the countless miles we've flown together, my friend. And now for which my mind's now sweet embossed I can't help but feel a helpless sense of loss....

      I know this is a beginning and i'm there for you ten thousand percent, so let's get on with it my poet magnificent...

    • bellawritter23 profile image
      Author

      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      bb, I feel the same way all gone in the delete button this darn delete button but it is a new start and a new begining I had to if my book I wished to publish... but yea another one should be published shortly....

      smiles :)

      bella

    • bbnix profile image

      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      I have a vision of an establishment, and yes, many a business I've bent, but this one is quite majestic you see, for it offers much hope for great thinkers to be sent.

      For this little corner of hope, you see, will offer a glimmer to cope, as I now see quite majestically, a union of art and writers, a hope for all to see.

      And as you've lead the way, my friend, to you I hope you'll say, that your books of wondrous poems will grace my shelves this way.

      A wondrous place, you see, full of wonder and such glee, the world will take much notice of two artists, you and me.

      And before I cast to short, my friend, there are others I too court, Ms. Tender, one great writer for sure, and many others here at wondrous hubpage core...

    • apache13 profile image

      Timothy C. Dove 6 years ago from Belleville AR.

      Good deal you had me worried what would I do to feed my addiction with out you I'd be a junky in the street begging for my next poetry fix lol :)

    • Minnetonka Twin profile image

      Linda Rogers 6 years ago from Minnesota

      What a great way to end my evening. Lovely poetry. Looks like you started fresh on hubpages. You are a courageous one.

    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..... well there is my stellar Bella - and then there's the rest of us ....... and you stand alone - on that poetic mountain - makes epi-man wish that he stayed in the exotic dance business .......

    • profile image

      Johnny Love 6 years ago

      Oh Bella, once again beautiful. Your muse?

    • Eiddwen profile image

      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      Another great poem and I liked the last verse in particular.

      Take care

      Eiddwen.

    • Genna East profile image

      Genna East 6 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Well, Bella, this one took my breath away; simply superb!

    • bellawritter23 profile image
      Author

      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      bb, Please do tell of this idea you have????

      Tim, You are the sweetest I still have to Write you a poem...... in time just so busy with this book thing it is taking me for a ride .....

      Twin, Yes I did. I am in the process of completing my book so all contents included had to be brought down :( my apologies for the inconvenience....

      Epi, I always love to find you within my comments it is always so blissful and graceful your words you type.... thank you

      Johnny, Thank you, you are so kind I appreciate your feedback it means a lot from you.... yes just the way I feel.

      Eid, thank you so very much the last verse hit me a bit too....

      Genna, Aww thank you I really apreciate you and your words you think....

      Smiles all :)

      bella

    • Sharyn's Slant profile image

      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Your work is beautiful Bella. Wishing you the best with your book!

    • bellawritter23 profile image
      Author

      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Sharyn, Thank you I appreciate the comment as always a pleasure to hear from you....

      smiles :)

    • MysteriousOne profile image

      MysteriousOne 6 years ago

      Best of luck with your new book!....I know you'll do great! Blessings!

    • bellawritter23 profile image
      Author

      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Mysterious, Thank you oh so very kindly I really do hope I do as too my nerves are just eating me.

    • DREAM ON profile image

      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      I am glad you found me so I can appreciate your wonderful poems.Beautiful words that melt as they are released.You have many tresures I see.Thanks for sharing.

    Click to Rate This Article