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Cautious girl and Happy-go-lucky guy.

Updated on April 17, 2013

Cautious girl says:

I feel
like there
is a
door somewhere
and you
will close it
one day behind

Happy-go-lucky guy says:

Can we
stay afloat
while we
are together.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh how sweet i love it james.. now that is poetry..

      Hugs

      Debbie

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks so much my dearest friend.Thanks for the night.It was a nice talking :) I can say that my style is improved little bit better than before.Thanks once again.

      Many blessings to you.

      James

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      I just commented. Where is it? I love your poem.. so adorable..

      Blessings

      Debbie

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      I see that you have a good appetite hehe I ve some others here not yet published :)

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh my..lol. james you can delete one...

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      So as to publish it there???Don t worry I will expand soon and thrive lol

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      Kristen Mazzola 4 years ago from South Florida

      So cute! It was short but perfect! Great job!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ khmazz.Thanks for the visit and comment.

      Have a nice day!

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      Elena 4 years ago from London, UK

      Aaawh... so sweet. I love it.

      The photo is cute too. "Welcome to cloud 9". Lol :-)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks Elena.I am glad you like it I love cloud 9 too lol

      Howdy friend?

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      schoolgirlforreal 4 years ago from USA

      Lol cute and funny :)

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      So sweet! I love reading your poems, and hate when I have to stop. well It's about bed time for me. So goodnight and have a bless day.

      I'll probably be back on here in like 8hrs to read more!!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Dianne,

      I am glad to hear that you liked my poetry.That really boosts my confidence and pumps a new blood into my veins.

      uhmm Almost you wake up,just 2 or 3 hours left for you to run haha

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      LOL. I'm up now so expect some more notifications.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      I am up too with you,Hope you and your boyfriend don't mind hehe I hate to be looked at as a third wheel hehe

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      He doesn't mine. he's at work right now when he gets home we usually play wow(World of Warcraft.) He's not one for poetry but he knows I love poetry and it's a part of me and he only ever wants to see me happy. We are both wow fanatic though.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Okay.

      Thanks,I am sure he liked when you read to him that poem;)

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