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Celestial Splendour!

Updated on October 25, 2014
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  • Produces

only a glimmering

stellate effect,

A galaxy

of flashing beauties

sparkling

its milky way

to your resplendent

stellar zone!


  • Seems

to have influenced me

from my anonymous birth,

A constellation of stars

solely bearing

your glistening name!


  • Just a glimpse of you,

Meteor,

has made

a comet of me,

tirelessly

circumventing you,

Eclipsing

the rest of the solar system!


  • Isn’t time

For the bald Moon

To take tips

from the hairy Sun?!


  • Struggles the Venus

to cope up with love

Midway between

the Sun and the Mars!

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    • always exploring profile image

      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Awesome and starship stellar!

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      W1totalk 3 years ago

      Awesome writing.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx al n w1

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Great words sujaya.

      Eddy.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 3 years ago from The Caribbean

      Anonymous birth? That's new. You take us far out into the celestial splendour you describe. Good!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx ed n do

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just love your creativity. Bald moon, hairy sun. Keep them coming.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx gyp

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      Dianna Mendez 3 years ago

      Very nicely done!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx tea

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