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Charlie Watching Peacefully

Updated on May 3, 2011

Charlie watching peacefully waiting until dawn

Charlie watching peacefully still tired and giving a yawn

Charlie watching Peacefully staring at the deep blue sea

Charlie watching peacefully thinking 'I wish that was me'

Charlie watching Peacefully not giving up yet

Charlie watching peacefully still very upset

Charlie watching peacefully shedding a little tear

Charlie watching peacefully thinking about his deadliest fear

Charlie watching peacefully breathed and sighed

Charlie watching peacefully thinking about his little brother who died..

Private Peaceful ... the book

I wrote this poem after reading the book Private Peaceful by Michael Morpurgo.  The story about the two brothers moved me very much.

Here is a link to my hub Private Peaceful about the brothers. 


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      Writer of Man 6 years ago from United Kingdom

      Thank you very much Garry for your comment. For you to say this means a lot! I definitely will keep at it!

      Love xxxx

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      Garry Bannister 6 years ago

      Well done Ruth! That's super. Keep at it - you've got talent!! xxx Garry.

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      alastar packer 6 years ago

      Yes, lovely and charming WM.The pics kewl too!