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Smile!Let it Go..

Updated on August 24, 2012

No leaf stirring

No wave coming to the shore

Only you like a foul standing

on a wooden raft

naked, agape,

trying to grasp with bare hands

a moment so fleeting,

so slippery lost in a maze,

Lie down

Grind to halt

Chill out

Let it go.

In heaven up above she is by now.

garnished by angel wings,flutes,harps

enfolded by a shining halo

which no sharp icicle can pierce

or a sea letter bottle can contain


Let it go..

A little bird told you once in an icy cold dawn,

while you were all awaken aimlessly staring at the sky,

to stop mourning over

a withered field,a shriveled lily

but your ears were off,

your eyes peeled ,waiting a shooting star

to wish upon..

The final curtains had already fallen down

"She is not coming back"

But I can assure you,my friend.

Life is not yet that bad

Still fresh,still precious

Perfect forms, perfect fits

Pleasant to the eye

Soothing to the mind

Look around,pick up one

and in a hurry,settle down.


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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Jackie Lynnley ,

      Thanks so much for your visit and comment.

      Have a nice day there!

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very beautiful and deep. From your heart no doubt.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Hey Elena,

      How are you doing

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      Elena 4 years ago from London, UK

      Lovely Poem - I learnt that we should just go with the flow.

      Happy Sunday.

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks so much Debbie,I appreciate your comment.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Beautiful much feeling...voted up... Debbie