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Cider and Rosie

Updated on March 27, 2011

Great Friends

Cider and Rosie where always together,

greatest of friends whatever the weather.


Rosie, you see was a girl on a mission,

High and dry but not in remission.


Giggling and wriggling her butt for the men

Cider gave her the buzz to play then.


Rosie was a real sad case, outed by the human race,

She looked around for the smallest of space,

to keep her men entertained and content,

Cider was their to aid her lament.


The men they walked by checking carefully

"Hey Rosie" they cried, give me your time freely

But Rosie was cute, and with the eye of a newt

she new this would not happen.


"Hey guys" she would say, "if you want this suite

which is tidy and neat, you have to give me a dollar

for the parking meter is already ticking,

and the landlady is starting to holla."


Cider and Rosie where never apart, because one didn't live without the other,

Rosie was smart and knew from the start, that those stilettos where her cover,

because with Cider and shoes she had heard the news,

that men liked her better.


So no clothing she wore, she knew the score,

of how to entertain her brother.

For whose life it would seem, was better than hers

he treated her like his lover.





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      Mrs. J. B. 6 years ago from Southern California

      Very intense and so well written. WOW... Submit your works

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      Peg Cole 6 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      Well you are witty and clever and I'm still rereading to see if I can get the double meaning. Sort of reminds me of the song "They all said Louise was not half bad. . ." You have the talent for poetry. Loved "cute, and with the eye of a newt."

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi Genna, nice of you to visit, three times I am not surprised as having read this poem several times myself there are parts not so fluent. but I have left it alone and keep looking on it as a learning curve, but your comment was much appreciated and as ever encouraging.

      Granny's House, Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving me such a lovely comment.

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hey Bill, you surprised me, I thought you would have gone for the verse "Hey guys" hoped it had made you smile. x

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      Granny's House 6 years ago from Older and Hopefully Wiser Time

      Fantastic!. That was fun to read

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      Genna East 6 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      I read this three times, and am still in awe of this poem. Fascinating and poignant read. Thank you. Up and awesome.

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      WillStarr 6 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      I haven't got past that 'butt wiggle' yet! :-)

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi Bill, keep guessing this one has a double meaning lol

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      WillStarr 6 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      I'm getting all sorts of mind pictures and questions out of this one!

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      thank you for calling over tumblintumbleweed. I enjoyed playing around with this one, which could have two meanings lol

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      tumblintumblweed 6 years ago

      WOW! Very powerful and clever piece! Kept my attention!!

      Thank you for sharing!