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Cloaked Beneath

Updated on March 30, 2011

 

Cloaked beneath the shadiness

No exposure given with loveliness

Excluded from all perception

Led into ones visual conception

 

Held into the light with given formation

Blossomed and flourished with mutation

Unbearable to the eye grasped with touch

Nourished with sense consumed by much

 

Underlying daybreak deemed by devotion

Caressed quietly expressing emotion

Transported within the bared hand

Releasing its essence at ones command

 

Spoken to in soft tune thirsting no longer

Watchful of its transformation secured stronger

Empowered by determination

Exhausted in reach of elation  

 

 

bellawitter23(copyright)2011

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Bold!

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Birdie, Thanks :)

      smiles :)

      bella

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      You are so eloquent with your words. Beautiful.

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      Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      In Earned Elation,Of Course,with my standing Ovation!;)

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Ace, Thank you very much always look forward to reading your thoughts on my art.

      Acer, lol thanks pal your the bestest!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      Powerful write from a powerful source!

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Thanks tnder! I appreciate the comment as always ....

      smiles :)

      bella

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      h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia

      the shroud of falsehood. amazing!

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      Genna East 5 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      When I saw this photo, it reminded me of the cloak that Bryce Dallas wore in The Village. Beautiful words.

      “Exhausted in reach of elation…” This one blew me away. Up and beautiful.

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      bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

      A cloak of strong Will beside you

      Yet empty to feel something to belong to

      A true friend to be sure, a passion so pure

      An exposure mutation elation it is true

      There is nothing you can't reach, the sweetest to teach

      And still one can't help but hope to be near you

      A lightest friends touch, one might steal as too much

      Yet a friendship must confess one's heart to be true

      It is all as quite simple for this man has no pickle

      It's only that friendship can fly as the sky's blue

      So transform you must, a dear friend to trust

      For your sweet determined and long blessed elation

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      H, thanks a bunch for stopping by!!

      Genna never seen seen the village I thought this image went well with the poem thanks genna I appreciate your kind words always!!

      bb, I can never go by without reading your beauty in flipping my poems and making them about me this is truly an honor as always :)

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Bumpsysmum 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

      Simply beautiful bellawritter23, loved the flow and the hidden meanings :-)

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      Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

      Your words exude such strength... Beautiful!

      Watchful of its transformation secured stronger

      Empowered by determination

      Exhausted in reach of elation

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      bumpsys, thank you yes lots of hidden meaning indeed I am happy they reached you!!

      Sally, Thank you very much yes strength I guess has been on my side lately lol :)

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Johnny Love 5 years ago

      Smile lovely Lady. quite the gift of pen. Love to read your words. amazing you are

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Johnny, thanks pal my pen can write sometimes......

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Johnny Love 5 years ago

      I actually used a pen the other day and I must say, it was strange. Oh and i love the ink on your skin, pain is love and love is ink. or something.

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Yeah I very seldom use an actual pen... but thanks yes pain is love and love is pain and ink marking the pain...

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      Johnny Love 5 years ago

      WOW, I like this view much more. i miss the feeling. love the pain you show. blessings.

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      lol yes pain can be shown through my bitterness at times with myself but hey its what makes up our character....

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      youmeget 5 years ago

      This is lovely bella, I enjoy reading it.

      youmeget

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      You, Thank you very much!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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