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Close your eyes ……and let’s get lost (the poem)

Updated on August 23, 2012
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Close your eyes…

Let’s go for a daydream,

Are you not feeling

my tender touch here and there….

as my breath so near…

combing your hair

with my long finger…..

hugging your inertia

lemme hold you to my core.

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Just close your eyes

And give all your strain

To my sigh….

So much pain in your smile

So much ruin in your sleep

But still you walk

To reach the farthest distance

From where you have started

Dear, I can feel

The rain of your tears

When in darkest

Of many nights

you still miss me.

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Some candle burn incessant

On the white petal

Of the fire of our temptation

Of our timeless love…..

Let the worries worry a bit

Oh dear… close your eyes

And sleep in my arms…

Let the world jump

In the sea of hell

For a change….

The aroma of delicious

Flowers whitening the

Luxury of fire of our soul.

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Close your eye…

And let’s get lost..

In the fire of our love

How long we will die?

How many deaths we will live?

How many tears we will smile?

How many smiles we will cry?

Dear..for a change

Can’t we die a life?

Can’t we live a death?

Rising sky high in your

Irresistible passion……

For a change let’s just

Get lost in the warmth

of the many edges.

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Tired of the mask

Carrying for so long….

Wnna live a life

May be for a while…

Don make me open my eyes

Closed shut….

Else the world will be unmasked

And hell will break loose….

I wnna die

With you

If life is so burden

To carry the mask………….

Can’t we let the two sides

Of the river meet for once……………..

May be death is best for us.

Close your eyes…and let us die !!!

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    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      6 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@ Huey19 ...welcome to my piece of world here. The end....yeah little drastic may be but well life is all about that for me. Anyways I am waiting to know how u do like my other hubs as well. sure gonna check you out soon also.

      Thanks for your visit, comment. Its much precious for me.

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      Amy 

      6 years ago from Chicago

      Beautiful words and rhythm here. The end did drastically change mood to my surprise but it was absolutely beautiful. i look forward to sifting through your other hubs. keep it up.

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      6 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      thank you @ nighthag.....for your gracious visit and kind comment here.....its much inspiring to take on a new journey to try to pull you in again:-)

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      K.A.E Grove 

      6 years ago from Australia

      dramatic, beautiful and powerful a wonderful combination here creating a love poem that pulls you in and refuses to let go...

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      6 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Michelle dear,

      Many thanks for your precious comment here. And you are right always...he he he.

      Your votes and everything are much valuable for me, dear.

      Take care.

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      Michelle Liew 

      6 years ago from Singapore

      Wow, you must've been thinking of Romeo and Juliet when you wrote this, dghbrh!! A beautiful poem, votes up and away!

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      6 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Faith,

      Thank you very much for your gracious visit and comment here. I am much honored.

      ..............................................................................................................

      Thank you@juneaukid .......for your comment here. Your kind visit and comment is much appreciated.

      .............................................................................................................

      Thank you @Ryem.....for finding my words beautiful and for your kind votes. Its much welcome here.

      ............................................................................................................

      Mhatter......thank you for your kind visit here and that you took time to comment here. Its always much welcome.....and my idea...wellll.....

      :-)

      .........................................................................................................

      Dear Gypsy,

      Mind gets so much attracted to death..hence the conclusion....friend:-)

      Thank you for your comment and visit here.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Dramatic and powerful. Must death be the conclusion?

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      What a turn.. but if you see your idea thru....

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      Ryem 

      6 years ago from Maryland

      These words are so beautiful. Voted up

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      Richard Francis Fleck 

      6 years ago from Denver, Colorado

      This is a very beautiful, forceful love poem!

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      Faith Reaper 

      6 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, very dramatic poem! In His Love, Faith Reaper

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