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Cuppa cloud -a Haiku

Updated on July 31, 2012
cuppa coffee in rainy evening ....!
cuppa coffee in rainy evening ....! | Source

A one part haiku about cuppa cloud in a cosy corner !


Layered cloud dark sky filled

Dusky voices tire cuppa coffee cream frilled

Cosy mood rainy warmth thrilled

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      A nice cup of coffee there! Creative!

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      win-winresources 4 years ago from Colorado

      Hi dghbrh-

      Nice verse and great mental image. Don't think it's haiku though, which is usually 5-7-5. (Don't mean to be the haiku police...)

      -DW

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      dghbrh,

      Clever idea for a poem!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      I live for my coffee! Thank you for sharing. Jamie

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      I am a lover of java and enjoyed this haiku as well.

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Very Creative!! Good Job!!

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      All we need is 2 lips to drink this up

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@midget38 for your visit and kind words.

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      Thank you@win-winresources (DW).....for your visit and for you taking time to comment. I am just exploring the wonderful world of Haiku poem.....I am trying to learn the technique and your comment is much appreciated and welcome here. While learning some thoughts comes to mind which i like to put down and throw for healthy criticism which helps me a lot to learn. I am very thankful to you.

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      Thank you @Josh for your continual inspiration, friend:-)

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      Thank you@jhamann (Jamie) for you kind visit here and taking time off to comment on my work.

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      Thank you@shining, for enjoying the haiku.

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      Thank you@Patty for your kind words and continual support, friend.

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      Thank you@Mhatter, for your wonderful words and taking time off to comment on my work. It is always much appreciated.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      I liked this now you made me want my favorite - a nice cup of coffee with a spoonful of vanilla ice cream floating on top.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      welcome dear.......wowwwww sounds interesting. hope you enjoy your cup of coffee. Thanks for making time to comment here.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      haiku filled with sweet aroma. Beautiful and awesome and up!

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      Elena 4 years ago from London, UK

      Lovely Haiku and I like the coffee too.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Spy...thank you so much for your wonderful words here.

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      Thank you@Lay E for stopping by and commenting .......its much appreciated.

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