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Color Ambience

Updated on August 30, 2012

Color Ambience


Dull lance sounds sling luke temp around us to hear


Colors indulge into loud shades of blank trees


Seeing more noise than observed in the ear



If our eyes could only hear what it sees


Spectrum's might fly over miles of seas


Blended slick ground-shadows, vanish our chi


Vibrations give secret performance of staged views


Seen inside thoughts are plucks of each colorful muse


Rough taste of keys pitch tones high-down in me


Stuck with paralleled ambience in life between thee





Subliminally Thoughtless

"Poetry for Now"

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      Kathryne Waller 5 years ago from Knoxville, TN USA

      Cruelkindness, you have captured an idea of what it would be like if all our senses could detect, and our minds be open, to the full spectrum around us. Beautifully written!

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      iggy-kun 5 years ago from United States of America

      Amazing and beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading this. Great job!

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      Jaggedfrost 5 years ago

      I will give you one thing, you managed to give the illusion of depth. There was even the aura of meaning. The video was interesting even if a little bizarre. Now i am curious. What does it actually mean to you?

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      snowdrops 5 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      Beautiful poem! Thank you!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      this is very..deep..and interesting. all my votes!

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      "If our eyes could only hear what it sees"

      I like the poem and found it interesting how the video inspired you.

      Voted up and awesome.

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      d.william 5 years ago from Somewhere in the south

      Great poem. Thanks for sharing.

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      Ann Carr 5 years ago from SW England

      Very interesting! Great idea for alternative inspiration - always a good thing. Voted up, useful and interesting.

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Beautifully written. Voed up.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Vibrations give secret performance of staged views

      Seen inside thoughts are plucks of each colorful muse

      Rough taste of keys pitch tones high-down in me

      Stuck with paralleled ambience in life between thee

      Love how you put this together--

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      Thank you for this poem:

      "Rough taste of keys pitch tones high down in me"

      Incredible. Jamie

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Makes me think of everything coming upon us at once till we can no longer absorb or understand what we see and hear.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      That poem makes me think of Ambient music define in verses about nature. Vote Up!

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      cruelkindness..are you saying that we are being bommbarded by what surrounds us 24-7..yet even though we absorb it, cannot be explained or understood..and we just accept it ? At least that's my perception...great poem..although very edgy...good job...

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Sorry cruelkindness, I can understand your very different poem.

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