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Colors of Sunset ~haiku~

Updated on July 6, 2013


The sun kissed the sea

While painting the lovely sky

Orange and purple


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.


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      Earl 5 years ago

      Awesome. The picture speaks in itself in silence....

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      Lyn 5 years ago

      Oh that's so awesome!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Earl and Lyn..Thanks for stopping by :)

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Sunset beautifully painted in your Haiku.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Oh thank you so much Nithya.

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      snowdrops 5 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      Sunset colors in a haiku! So awesome!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks pal!

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago from Michigan, United States

      I knew you could Haiku, the words certainly came for you M. This is lovely and the picture is a perfect compliment to the writing. Beautiful job friend. Voted up, shared, beautiful, interesting, and awesome :) Keep your talent going strong.

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      europewalker 5 years ago

      Well done, the photo fits the haiku perfectly:)

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      As soon as I saw the picture, I uttered aloud, "oh wow!". Then I read your haiku and said it again. Love this, Spy. (Purple is my favorite color and sunrises/sunsets are my favorite visions).

      You just get better and better with each piece, my friend!

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi M. a beautiful sunset to highlight a wonderful haiku !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Indeed it did!

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      unknown spy..few words..but..deep...loved it..and the pic.

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      sweethearts2 5 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      Picture and poem-compliments of each other.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      james, Europewalker, Brave, Kashmir, Deb, KJF, Sweethearts2,

      Thank you all for the wonderful messages and for supporting my work.. Thank you! Blessings to all!

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      Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

      Absolutely lovely! and the photo was just right!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Nell! Thank you. so sweet of you :)

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Nice work, congratulations

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hehe thank you so much Mhatter

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      Deborah Neyens 5 years ago from Iowa

      Lovely poem. Beautifully illustrated.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Deborah. Glad you stopped by.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      You are really talented with the haiku's. I think the choice of photo is AWESOME as well.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Beckie! Oh wow, that's one beautiful message! (smile*)

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      noel autor 4 years ago

      The sun is indeed the most powerful object in the sky. It can give colors and brightness to the seas and mountains.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      You are absolutely right Sir Noel! Thank you!

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      Teresa Schultz 4 years ago from East London, in South Africa

      Beautiful haiku that didn't even need a picture with it to put a picture of colors of sunset in my own in my head - but your picture's better than the one in my head. Lovely. Well done.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Teresa. Thank you, that's so sweet of you. Much appreciated.

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      Nancy Yager 4 years ago from Hamburg, New York

      Beautiful. I am with Teresa. Your words painted the picture in my mind.

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Simple masterpiece of words and color! Love it!

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      Debby Bruck 4 years ago

      bea-u-ti-ful sunset colors and haiku. Blessings, Debby

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Oh Thank you so much my friends...

      @Nancy

      Teaches

      Debby

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      M,

      How did I miss this hub M?! I have no idea, it must not have come through my email! Sorry! Well, here I am! :) Awesome haiku, beautiful!

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Now this is one fantastic sunset, M. All the way!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hahaha Thank you J! you're the best!

      Michelle, thank you so much for the support :)

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Great job, amazing image, way to go!!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Jo, thanks a lot :)

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      Tammy 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Beautiful haiku. I love the ocean. :)

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      Gail Sobotkin 4 years ago from South Carolina

      Love the Haiku and also the stunning photo.

      Nothing better than watching the sun set over the bay or ocean.

      Voted up across the board except for funny.

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      B Lucy 4 years ago from Podunk, Virginia

      Wow . . .

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Tammy, Happyboomernurse, Lucy,

      Big big thank to you guys for your kind comments.

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      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      I just love sunsets. :) Lovely haiku, Unknown!!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you much Aubrey!

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      ignugent17 4 years ago

      Very very beautiful !

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      thank you so much Ignugent!

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      alocsin 4 years ago from Orange County, CA

      Quite evocative. Voting this Up and Beautiful.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you much Alocsin!

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