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Come! Come! My Sweet Love, Come!

Updated on February 22, 2017
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Manatita is an esteemed author living in London, UK. He writes spiritual books, flash fiction and esoteric poetry, his favourite genre.

The fire of love


Love flames


Floating gracefully on the river Yamuna,

I basked in the joy of two elegant swans,

Bonding together like conjoined twins.

Drifting romantically on a carpet of celestial auras,

I await the awakening of the dawn;

Long for the coming of my Sunrise.

Come! Sweet longing! Take wings!

Let the flames of thy inner cauldron,

Caress her soft and dew-filled lips.

Spouting like a fountain from this forlorn heart,

May the core of my breath enfold her,

Like wings of precious kisses,

Floating on the hyacinths of her soft; delicate lips.

Burning an enchanted furnace in my emotions,

She sends me crazy with delight!

How I wish to serve her with an undying vigour,

Moulded from our own intimate tears!

Now timeless ... timeless … timeless, is the moment,

As the humming birds; the firmament of starlit grandeur,

Invite me to sing her a melody,

And I bask in their cadences of cosmic Light, singing:




“Come, come, my sweet love come,

Be my darling ruba tum tum!”

Romeo and Juliet


An Effulgence of Light


Poem continues

O my Juliette, I am your Romeo, and you?

The peerless fire of my Soul.

Butterflies dance in symmetry as I gaze,

Listening to the call of the Aspen,

Whispering a most wonderful song called LOVE.

The translucent hues from my myriad-tinted windows,

Streams through like a row of radiant candles,

Augmenting an unspoken bliss that leaves me speechless!

O my Trojan Helen; O my Princess Nefertiti!

May our life-giving energies, continue to grow and blossom,

In the fragrant garden of the Eternal.

-Manatita, The Lantern Carrier. ©Copyrighted, 20th July, 2016.

~ Awakening The Inner Light ~

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      manatita44 21 months ago from london

      Thank you ... thank you ... she is very dear to me. Much Love.

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      Ashi 21 months ago

      Dear Manatita,

      I don't what to say about this dedication. You are such a magician of a poem. You give heart and breathing to each and every word. You each line creates a picture in front of readers eyes and your words make us think for hour and hour.

      What shall I say about this Queen? We are short of words to describe this beautiful and indeed innocent lady, Surabhi.

      She is having a big heart with a sharp brain.

      Indeed, A Sweet but INNOCENT Love Poem for charming Queen, Surabhi.

      Lot of love to you manatita





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      manatita44 22 months ago from london

      Thanks Deb,

      I know you're the Master or perhaps the Professora here. I found another two that conveyed the idea of 'conjoined' as well. But this picture won hands down.

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      Deb Hirt 22 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      That is an apt picture of the Black Swan, as well as the white one, as well. Beauty reins in a trio!

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      manatita44 23 months ago from london

      I appreciate you, Brother Venkatachari M. Gratitude ...

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      Venkatachari M 23 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      Beautiful lines with a great message of Love. A nice dedication to Surabhi.

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      manatita44 23 months ago from london

      Thank you, Bro. Like Love, yes. Appreciated. Om Shanti!

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      Hari Prasad S 23 months ago from Bangalore

      Beautiful like love. Excellent. Great dedication to dear sister surabhi. Lol bro.

      - hari

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      manatita44 23 months ago from london

      My deepest empathies, my Brother. You remind me of Bill and Eric, in the nicest possible way. Of course I wish their Mrs much good health and a great life, God's willing. Much Love.

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      Chris Mills 23 months ago from Missoula, Montana at least until August 2018

      manatita, yes, she passed away in 2008 after 24 wonderful years.

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      Marlene Bertrand 23 months ago from USA

      Thank you Manatita. You are so dear. Much love always to you. Extend love to your loved ones, as well.

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      manatita44 23 months ago from london

      He he. It should only get better, eh? Marlene you're a star. Love to your family and friends.

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      Marlene Bertrand 23 months ago from USA

      I read it again and I still like it a lot!

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      Surabhi Kaura 23 months ago

      Awesome! Let's wait then. Cool. Love ya too!

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      manatita44 23 months ago from london

      Thanks Again, Marlene. The poem is changing fast! I reckon I put it up to quickly.

      Surabhi, Please do. The poem has changed again. Enjoy your class. Dhiraja, my friend, will do the cover of Maxims For Our Children: A Look At The Teachings of Jesus, The Christ. Love you!

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      Surabhi Kaura 23 months ago

      Whoa! I sign in… and O' boy! That’s the first thing I see in the news feed. I thank you so much, Acharaya. Loved this poem of yours. You're so loving. What can I say? God bless your noble Heart. I will read again once my class is over. Om Shanti.

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      Marlene Bertrand 23 months ago from USA

      Manatita, I do, I do, I do like the chorus very much.

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      manatita44 23 months ago from london


      Thank you so much, my Dear Friend. So sweet of you!

      Marlene B,

      Ha ha...tricks of the trade. Did you like my little chorus? Gratitude ...much.

      Cam, you're in love, Bro...did you say your loved one passed? trying to remember, sorry. Much Love.

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      Chris Mills 23 months ago from Missoula, Montana at least until August 2018

      "You send me crazy with delight!" Who doesn't want to feel that? This tells the longing every one of us feels or wants to feel. You express in beautiful words the desire of every man and every woman's heart.

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      Marlene Bertrand 23 months ago from USA

      This is very beautiful. I like how you cleverly interrupted the cadence with, "O my Trojan Helen; O my Princess Nefertiti!"

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      Frank Atanacio 23 months ago from Shelton

      very inspiring and wonderfully written my friend bravo..:)

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      manatita44 23 months ago from london

      Thank you, thank you, my Friend ... So glad that you like her ... my sweet student.. my sisterji... my Friend.

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      John Hansen 23 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Manatita, I will read anything dedicated to our dear friend Surabhi. Your poetry is full of beauty. Just like the subject. Stunning photos too.


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