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Come Join Love

Updated on August 25, 2013
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Come Join Love

I'm gonna guide these seeds til they sprout, Don't deny the friendly bout.

I make one, I make 2, which equals 3 and beyond me.

The spreading of a miracle, come join along and enjoy the lyrical.


Spreadings of delight, spreadings of love, come be free like a dove.

I invite you to my lair, stare. Then make your glorious glare!

I invite all who join, to take in and employ.

Cause this is elegance to be shared, then flared to make a mighty stare!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Good job!I give you a standing ovation for this piece .Voted up

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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      Thank you James =D

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Well done. Congratulations. Jamie

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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      Thanks :)

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Excellent piece here! That is exactly why I love to spread "HubLove" all around HP Town, and not keep it to ourselves.

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      Thank you Faith, I'm glad that's what your all about, it's what attracted me to follow you haha.

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      Ana-Maria 3 years ago

      I suppose you aren't going to publish this comment unless I tell you that you are the best and most inspirational poet I have ever read. However, I simply don't find this poem very good, and no, it doesn't make me a troll for saying so. It just makes me an honest reader with an opinion.

      It appears that you don't put any thought into the words you choose, other than asking yourself the question "do they rhyme?" If "yes" you put the two words together, and if "no" you don't. For example

      "I invite you to my lair, stare."

      makes no literal sense, and no figurative sense. According to your forum rant, anyone who asks you questions you is a troll, but the question remains, what does that mean? You can't answer it because it doesn't mean anything. You just thought the words sounded good together. Aren't poets supposed to be honest?

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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      loool, what's sad is, is that you had to comment as a guest and didn't have the courage to comment on your own account. I am an honest poet, if you don't get it that's your problem. Your comprehension doesn't mix well cause you don't want to use your mind to understand and instead you want to use it to put assumptions onto me asking "how it makes sense", when really, it's quite simple. It's my knowledge, inviting them to my "lair" my knowledge-realm for them to take in and give. Haha was that so bad? there are metaphor's in poetry. I'm sorry if this is how your thoughts are at this time. I hope for you to change them and move on being positive in life.

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