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Come! Be a Haven Unto My Soul, O Love. A Loving Offering to Patricia Straubie (pstraubie48)

Updated on January 20, 2016

Wishing You And Loved One's God's Greatest Blessings

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Come! Be a haven unto my Soul, o Love!

You have unlocked the sacred chambers of my Heart,

And handed me a welcome invitation.


This fragile frame knows it is embracing greatness --

A most meticulous Designer --,

Awakening a perennial Bliss from Heaven.


Cute Lover, You're like an Aladdin’s cave!

But with my secret ‘Open Sesame,’

I just know that I have found my Treasure.


A most amazing phenomenon in my Life,

Is the joy of meeting You within.

Absorbed in the glistening beauty of Thy fiery Flame,

I know neither my name, nor whence You came.


Now morning penetrates my window;

Blue skies awaken the nightingales of the dawn.

I lie in trance, drinking the wine of crimson roses,

Lost in contemplation of Your Great Unknown.


_Manatita, The Lantern Carrier. Copyrighted, 18th January, 2016.

~Awakening The Inner Light.

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      Surabhi Kaura 14 months ago

      Aww – how I love this! As I entered into the emporium of Love, I met copious Souls, but there was one which simply stood in silence. The radiant rays were so magnetic that I couldn’t resist, and so is this captivating poetry.

      ‘I know neither my name, nor whence You came…’ sums it all. Thank you for writing this masterpiece. Oh, and hats off for this beautiful dedication to your friend. I have voted for ‘A sweet unspoken silence of the soul.’ God Bless :)

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      Bill Holland 14 months ago from Olympia, WA

      As PS and I often share, blessings are heading your way on the wings of an angel.

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Surabhi, So happy that you love this! I also entered into a paragon of Love, and met with many Souls! One was an embodiment of Elegance and stateliness, and my Heart stirred.

      Gratitude,my Sweet sparkling and comforting butterfly.

      Hi Bill, Namaste! Send her my Love and best wishes. Have a great Monday!

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      Frank Atanacio 14 months ago from Shelton

      a very well written dedication my friend kudos :)

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Thank you Frank, on this cold but pleasant Monday morning. I'm reading your past works, but I don't think I've seen any recent ones. Taking a break?

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      Shaloo Walia 14 months ago

      "Lost in contemplation of the Great Unknown." Only a sincere seeker can think this way.

      Beautiful poem with such lovely and colorful images.

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      A kind and loving sentiment, Shaloo. Truly appreciated!

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      Word 14 months ago from Chicago

      Such richness and delicacy as I travel through your words of ecstasy. The music and video is so heart warming. PS48 is so deserving of your touching words and music aroma. She should float on the rapture of love for always. Super performance here manatita.

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      Venkatachari M 14 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      Beautiful lines with deeply enthralling feelings. Patricia is a greatly noble person and well deserves this loving dedication.

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Brother Al,

      your sweet words are always an encouragement to me. I truly appreciate them. Joy and Peace.

      Venkatachari M,

      Yes, my brother, you're sure right. It is quite possible that she needs some extra prayers. Let us hold her and family in our thoughts. Much Gratitude. Hari.

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      Ralph Schwartz 14 months ago from Idaho Falls, Idaho

      Such "Mutual Awakening" is rare - when spirits two become being one.

      Honorable magic, conjuring the endless romantic interlude....

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Very sweet, Ralph. I like that. Nice! Gratitude, Bro.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 14 months ago from Southern Illinois

      The first picture is so beautiful and your poetry is magical. Love, how could we live without it? A tribute to a sweet lady..

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Yes, Ruby. I had another look. Awesome, eh? 'Magical!' I Love this word. Writing, my Sweet? let me know. Gratitude, and take care.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 14 months ago from The Caribbean

      I like how you weave the Alladin mystery into this search. A great love offering in response to those protective angels Patricia keeps sending.

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Hi and hello! So lovely to know that you've got a break. Thank you so much and yes, great receiving those angels. I need many! Yes, that was 'cool' bringing in the Alladin's piece. I heard the word 'treasure' and from this one word I created about four lines. Much Love, Dee.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 14 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      A wonderful, wonderful poetic tribute. I love that last verse - just the thought of drinking the wine of crimson roses.

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Perhaps they can cure some ails, ha ha. Thank you so much, my Dear. Have a great day!

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      Shauna L Bowling 14 months ago from Central Florida

      This is such a beautiful, heartfelt ode to Patricia. I know she'll be blown away when she reads this!

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Thank you so much, Shauna. I think that she has a lot going on. My Love to her if you speak. Thank you so much for your loving and continued support.

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      Deb Hirt 14 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      The Great Unknown holds a good many secrets, and some will discover the Secrets of the Universe.

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Yes indeed! A Great many secrets will be revealed. Thank you Deb.

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      Caroline Marie 14 months ago from Close to Heaven

      Beautiful! I love your words. :)

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Thank you Caroline. I really appreciate this. Write to me. Tell me about you. ceeccil@hotmail.com. Much Love.

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