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Come With Me (poem)

Updated on August 29, 2012

A memory

Returns to me

Again to see

What used to be

Come lay with me

Come stay with me


Into this light

My soul took flight

A past delight

Did there ignite

Come lay with me

Come stray with me


A heartfelt hue

That once we knew

Returns to view

Our Joyous dew

Come lay with me

Come sway with me


And soon came moon

To add its tune

As lips commune

Made lovers swoon

Come lay with me

Come pray with me


For don’t you see

My memory

You came to be

A dream set free

You laid with me

You stayed with me


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      Ann1Az2 5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      I love the rhythm in this poem. The words, as always are romantic and sensual. Voted up.

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      Sasha Kim 5 years ago

      Beautiful beautiful poem! The rhythm is absolutely amazing ^_^ Love it! voted and shared!

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      Absolutely sensual to say the least, wonderful words of love.


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Great poem. Passing it on.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very beautiful..She stayed with you, the best part..Awesome..

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Very nice. The tropical setting makes it even more inviting.

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      pearlmacb 5 years ago from Switzerland

      Beautiful words, I also like your choice of title for this one :)


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      Darrylmdavis 5 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      A relaxing piece. Thanks for sharing. :-)

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      Patty Kenyon 5 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Very Beautiful and Romantic!!! Awesome Job!!! Voted Up, Awesome, and Beautiful!!!

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      ignugent17 5 years ago

      Beautiful and I agree with Michelle it is very romantic. Voted up and more.

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      Michelle Liew 5 years ago from Singapore

      A really romantic piece, and I like how the repetition brought this about. Great, MHatter.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      I like the surprise ending, the poem flowed so beautifully, rather like drifting down a quiet stream and coming to an abrupt end. Soft sensuous magic.

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Mh -

      I like the styling. Also, very visual and serene. You really are a romantic at heart, aren't you? Great poem, my friend!

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      newusedcarssacram 5 years ago from Sacramento, CA, U.S.A

      beautiful poem...

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Wow...romantic delight with a pinch of little twist at the really know how to ignite the crave of emotion in heart. Well job done. I pressed many buttons here and passing it on for sure.

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      Mark G Weller 5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Wow, this is so very sensual and spiritual.

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      Sunnie Day 5 years ago deep and profound..

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      MHatter you write the most beautiful poems that flow like magic.. If I could only write a little bit like you I would be so happy..

      hugs from tennessee


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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Lovely, and I loved the "come pray with me" part the best. God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This flows beautifully!