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Comprehend my love!

Updated on March 19, 2015
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Suborn you

to comply with love

I shall not,

My dear!

Yet to be stubborn

to complicate

my expressions

with your notion

of love,

permit not I;

Listen,

oh dear!

Mine is candid,

though candied;

honest

though honeyed;

perennial,

though paranoiac;

For your understanding

kindly allow me

to paraphrase

or summarize

or at least brief out

my poetic rendering;

Deny you?

Seems not

in a receptive mood!

My only request then -

Drive out fear

to love me dear,

My love!

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx vk

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      Victor W. Kwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

      Wonderful poetry, Sujaya!

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx til n gyp

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderful

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      Mary Craig 2 years ago from New York

      Lovely! Words that weave a love.

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx hari

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      Harish Mamgain 2 years ago from India

      Beautiful verses and so passionate !

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx jo

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Very nice Sujaya.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx aes

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      Mary Norton 2 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      You're quite a poet. Enjoyed reading this poem.