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Conceitedly Beautiful

Updated on May 31, 2012


The wind pulls your eyes to me.

In a blink the air gets still.

I brighten the room.

All has my attention.

Time is frozen..

Memorize with my glow.

Sight is blinded by my presence.

Captured by striking beauty.

I made the moment vivid.

In a flash it lasted forever.



Cruelkindness ( Subliminally Thoughtless)


The wind pulls your eyes to me.

In a blink the air gets still.

I brighten the room.

All has my attention.

Time is frozen..

Memorize with my glow.

Sight is blinded by my presence.

Captured by striking beauty

I made the moment vivid.

In a flash it lasted forever.



Cruelkindness ( Subliminally Thoughtless)

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Stopped the time for me for sure. Extreme visual. Mysteriously beautiful.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      All is perfect in a land of black and white or sepia. Voted up and awesome.

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      Thank you for visiting!

      Cruelkindness (Subliminally Thoughtless)

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      misshill 5 years ago from United States

      Beautiful poem and well written

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      Kimberly Shelden 5 years ago from Idaho

      Beautiful poem

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      stars439 5 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      Beautiful but with atitude too. Voted Up.

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      Timeofourlife 5 years ago

      This is so lovely! I love the concept. You're a great poet.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Memories captured by photo are most precious. You expressed it so well. Voted up and awesome.

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      Endlessly deep, this piece of poetry! Very interesting words...evokes plenty of reflections.

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      Senoritaa 5 years ago

      Nice poetry. Short and deep.

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      tobusinee - the supermodel scares me too

      cleaner3- much obliged for the comment

      writer20- thank you for giving me hope in voting

      always exploring- always honored for your remarks

      b.malin- much pleasure for the comment it was keenly felt

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      Life is one long Flash...Poignant Poem "Cruelkindness" quite a play on words.

      A Warm Welcome to Hub pages, we are like a "Family" of Writers here.

      I look forward to Following your Hubs.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I love this, " In a flash it lasted forever. " You have a remarkable way with words..

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      I enjoyed your poem. Voted up and beautiful.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      nice poem, simple but powerful use of your words.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Lovely poem, but I just love the eight legged conceited super model, simply beautiful, just had to pin it.

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      KDuBarry03 5 years ago

      Well written! I really enjoy your poetry; you get the reader truly thinking and involved with it!

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