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Conversations With Mr. Subconscious (Poem)

Updated on January 22, 2016

Have Gotten Used To Eating Healthy Enjoyably

Do Not Talk Back To Me

Cannot enjoy my life

if I don’t enjoy the good

I must ignore the strife

And enjoy healthy food.

Didn’t say healthy foods only

But enjoy eating healthy foods

And now I never feel lonely

And don't allow swinging moods

I enjoy drinking healthy water

Because it’s beneficial to well being

It’s more important not to eat pie

And pay attention to what I’m seeing

If it’s going to disfigure me

It’s more important to look appealing

If I eat for hunger or taste

It’s my figure that food is stealing

To attract and keep my mate

Turn down that tasty food

Or I’ll become overweight

And keep treating myself as rude

I don’t want to have a thirst

To be loved by the wrong ones

Under God wellbeing should be first

And avoid the relationship short runs

No excuse for not being in shape

It’s all because of bad food

Mustn’t use food to escape

And treat myself very shrewd

Time to discipline my emotions

And do for me what is best

Try to fix eating commotions

And get my proper rest.

I want my physique back

So that I can attract

That special one for me to love

Yes come to me my sweetest dove.



There Is A Second Chance And A Third

The Subconscious

The subconscious can be the Holy Spirit which is of God Himself. It usually gives you the best option to choose. It behooves you to heed to it.


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      Word 3 years ago from Chicago

      Hi Jackie, Excuse me for taking so long in getting back to you about this one. Hope all is going well. Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate you!

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      Word 3 years ago from Chicago

      Thanks Grandy for stopping by. You are so dear :-)

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      Mona Sabalones Gonzalez 3 years ago from Philippines

      Talk about excellent advice in poetic form. Fantastic!

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      Word 4 years ago from Chicago

      Ok Astra Nomik, u're funny. U got hungry? What did u eat? Anyway, thanks for complimenting.

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      Cathy Nerujen 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Oh gosh... I am ashamed to say I got hungry while reading this poem. The mention of food may have tripped my subconscious. LOL.

      As a woman who forces herself to go to the gym almost at gunpoint... I can echo a lot in this delightful poem.

      Eternal hope to all those trying to get in shape. I enjoyed this hub. :)

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      Word 4 years ago from Chicago

      Thanks Tg for your thoughtful comment. Blessings to you as well. You are a very talented and gifted writer.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      This put a smile on my face! What a creative idea....a poem about healthy eating! And I love that song as well, above addition considering the ending lines of the poem. Blessings to you!

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      This is the only one I have been sent. Good though and love the song. I will check here later if you have link to another, I looked around but don't see anything like you were talking about. I am really late getting notices sometimes. ^

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      Word 4 years ago from Chicago

      Well thank you and bless you BlossomSB. May you be on your way to having or may you have the look that you are pleased with. As you stated, our bodies are God's temple, we belong to God and many people don't understand that. Thank you for your beautiful and on time comment.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Yes! Our bodies are God's temple and we should respect them and care for them. It's not always easy, but well worth the effort and lots of healthy foods taste good, too.

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      Word 4 years ago from Chicago

      Yes, you can do it Kim. Must make some changes. Organize your day. Exercise, eat healthy, drink water and maintain a relationship with the Lord.

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      The older I get, the more challenging it is to stay in shape. I salute you for making the effort. It is not easy.



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      Word 4 years ago from Chicago

      Thanks for being so inspired Laurie and thanks for stopping by.

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      Rayne123 4 years ago

      Great inspirational hub