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Cotton Caught Covered Dream

Updated on May 13, 2010

Hand to me that shiny glass hand Grenade

And I say do not let go of this dull pin.

Take this letter opener and sit with me awhile

And admire those greenest cloud’s floating by.

Walk with I threw these bluest fields and scream

Out loud your animosity covered cry’s and listen

To that brown turning black soil die!

These flowers fly low!

And these birds bloom high!

Didn’t you know?

There Is no piece to tape back into this broken

Down so called ruined lettering.

The ancient letter in our bottle Is no more washing up

On our peaceful and prettiest shore!

Is It the blue tide we all so adore

No more ?

 

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    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      David Walston 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      @SunShine31---> Thank You Very Much

      Very Nice To Hear

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      Sunshiney31 

      8 years ago

      I floated through this one ,very good thanks so much for sharing your talent :)

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      poetlorraine 

      8 years ago

      this is good..... i likes it....

    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      David Walston 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      A Vivid Dream Dear..

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      kimberlyslyrics 

      8 years ago

      forgot to mention, this verse is all that and then some,

      And admire those greenest cloud’s floating by.

      Walk with I threw these bluest fields and scream

      Out loud your animosity covered cry’s and listen

      To that brown turning black soil die!

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      kimberlyslyrics 

      8 years ago

      so, tell,

      what's in the bottle?

      :o)

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      Michael Shane 

      8 years ago from Gadsden, Alabama

      Great job!

    • aware profile image

      aware 

      8 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

      cool hub . im a poetry guy . nice to see im not alone. good job bro .

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      Nameless 

      8 years ago

      This is a

      really cool hub!

    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      David Walston 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You So Much!

      So Thoughful Of You.

      Im So Glad Ive Put

      Myself Out There For

      The World!

      Ill Be Writing After

      My Beautiful Death Kimberly !

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      kimberlyslyrics 

      8 years ago

      just back, needed to rate it up again :)

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      kimberlyslyrics 

      8 years ago

      David why is there something that brings more thana curiosity

      of things we could see, but are afraid to reach it

      This touched me too

      All because of you

      Don't ever be through

      We'll go to the zoo?

      ha

      loved it

      Kimberly

    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      David Walston 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Im So Glad

      It Touched You.

      And Thank You So Much

      Its So Nice To Hear

      Constructive Criticism.

      And I agree.

      David Wayne

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      getmyback 

      8 years ago

      David , this somehow spoke directly to me or like I said it.

      My favorite now for sure so far.

      Music must be put to this

      Blues

      Bravo David

      You have much talent yet remain so humble, your one of the rare ones my friend.

      We need to start emailing soon, :)))))))))))))

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      Sapphire Fisher 

      8 years ago

      Very nice

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