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On Sniffing!

Updated on September 5, 2014
  • Occulting

my journey of life

with ocarina occasionally

Occluded I

an ochred ocelot!


  • Barging in

a barber's shop

Bandied I

with

a barbed banter!


  • Claquing

my claptrapped works

to success

Clarioned I

a clap clash

of claret!

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Definately definitive Sujaya. :)

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Very clever work, Sujaya!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      dare dear jo n bil

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Clever use of words and funny as well.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx blo

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      The way you use words is amazing. Your talent shines....

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnq al

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Cleverly done!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnq gyp

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      Robert E Smith 3 years ago from Rochester, New York

      You mentioned Ocarina. Is this musical instrument in your life? Do you play? I am fascinated by it and the mighty sound that the ocarina makes. I could hear this poem read with a light soprano chirping in the background. Or a fun melody on an alto. Very nice poem.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      no way no

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