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Couldn’t See (tanka)

Updated on April 11, 2015

She just couldn’t see

The reason for their grumbling

Hatred and distrust

Which someone brought on himself

For she had loved him too much


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      Shauna L Bowling 2 years ago from Central Florida

      Is there such a thing as loving too much? I suppose there is if it becomes smothering and obsessive. This tanka really made me think, Martin.