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Cracking a bit!

Updated on August 31, 2014

nuts...

around!

  • Voiding

my empty love

With

a volley of

vociferous viva-voce

Vivified I

A volitional

voluntary vocation!




  • Placating

my grotesque taste

With pied pizza

Plodded I

To plead a plebian

For

A platter of plum!




  • Debacling

my debonair life

With

A dearth of debted love

Debutted I

To decamp a dealer

into debris!


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    • kidscrafts profile image

      kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Nice work on words and sounds! I love the end picture :-)

      Enjoy your weekend!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      sane sorry same to u kid ha ha ha

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      breakfastpop 3 years ago

      What fun!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      have fun brk happy for u

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Brilliant sujaya;loved it and voted up.

      Eddy.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanx ed very kind of you

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Loved these and how they flow ---fun!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thank u aud enjoy

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Interesting poem and great use of alliteration!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanx blo for ur comments

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      mylindaelliott 3 years ago from Louisiana

      Interesting sounds and rythyms.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      this was actually pretty good

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanx for encouraging words myl n frnk

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      These sounds you create leave a lasting pleasant taste. Jamie

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      my pleasure jam

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      Deborah-Diane 3 years ago from Orange County, California

      Fun and creative use of words!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanx for ur encouraging words deb

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      Nellieanna Hay 3 years ago from TEXAS

      What fun! I love playing with the sounds of words, as well as their meanings, shades and subtleties . Your profile, also, is a treat to read! I know I must follow your Hubpage work! Hope you find time among what must be busy days writing and publishing!

      Thank you for visiting my hub site and commenting on one of my earliest hubs on it, Rain Dance!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      so sweet of you nel

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