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One Crazy Thought

Updated on March 15, 2013

I never thought I'd be in love like this...

There will always be
A place far greater
Than all the treasures unfold…
There will always be me and you
In a place far greater
Than we know.


We could be
On a dazzling Caribbean sea
Feeling the rushing waters
On our bare feet
Holding hands
On this secluded beach
When the sun had kissed
The silent sea.


Or on a wild, beautiful forest
Leaves falling,
Like autumn
Passing a lazy afternoon
Maybe a candlelight dinner
For two
On a chilly evening
That will bring us together
Again.


I also thought
What if we’re all alone?
In the midst
Of an empty song
We’ll hold onto each other
Once more
Until we caught a star
Far bright enough
To light our hearts.


And I woke up
From a long dream
This was only
A crazy thought,
A fantasy
Created by this imagination
I know this can’t be true
I see that in your eyes
‘cause someone has
Already taken…


The heart I was longing for.


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hi lhchan, thank you so much ^;^

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      lhchan 5 years ago

      Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Anu..thanks for stopping by!

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      Anoop Aravind A 5 years ago from Nilambur, Kerala, India

      Beautiful lines...

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi, thank you much!

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      chamilj 5 years ago from Sri Lanka

      Awesome! Thanks sharing!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks again Isa! Love it!

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      IsadorasThought 5 years ago

      Voting up, unknown spy!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you again Klara for the heart-warmign message. Oh how i love it!

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      klarawieck 5 years ago

      Nothing wrong with dreaming the impossible. Again, you use beautiful phrases and imagery to get it all out of your system. We can all learn from you. I loved this poem. Thank you!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      I am so grateful UH. Thank you so much for the votes and for your lovely message to me. I really really appreciate it. :)

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      Ugly Honest 5 years ago from Within the New York/DC Megalopolis

      ""M"" Ahh those crazy thoughts .... they can be used for inspiration or they can come back to get ya .... I had given up on poetry quite some time ago ..... But checked a few of these out .... You're not too simple and mercifully not too complex ... Very Honest ... voted up .... and You ""M"" are the recipient of my very first beautiful vote on Hub Pages .... Keep On

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Nyt J.. :)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      kk sounds good M, sleep well! :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow! aye aye captain. Will wait for it. see you!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      oh ok gotcha...hehe see you tomorrow, I will have a new hub, hot off the press for all my friends to visit! :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hehe.. just a shortcut for sweetdreams goodnight .. Nyty nyt.. :)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      sorry don't get the nyt, do you mean anytime? if so then thanks :) hehe lol

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Nyty nyt J. God bless!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Aww, thanks :) You are very welcome, my pleasure :) Have a great night and take care M! :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      J. you're awesome! thank you so much! Im so much flattered with your lovely message. Glad to know you here. you're a great writer too, i love your hubs and your poems.

      Lovedoctor, thank you for liking and voting this up.

      xoxo..

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      lovedoctor926 5 years ago

      This is very beautiful! You have a vivid imagination. vote up.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Whoops have to come back, forgot to add my votes(which are all the way down the line! and my share, shame on me!) hehe :)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      WOW M, you have an incredible taste for poetry, I would try to pick out a section to comment on, but I feel like I would have to copy and paste the whole poem to my comment, which I will try an stay away from! hehe :)

      Great imagery, and again a great relevant theme for your readers! You are an awesome writer, and I am glad to be following you!

      P.S thanks for stopping by and reading my new hub; you really encouraged me! :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello dear Sue, thank you for the votes and for the read. Take care :)

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Unknown spy

      Or on a wild, beautiful forest

      Leaves falling,

      Like autumn

      Passing a lazy afternoon

      Maybe a candlelight dinner

      For two

      On a chilly evening

      That will bring us together

      Again.

      Wonderful imagery.

      Voted up and away.

      Take care :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Sir, its an honor, thank you very much for stopping by and reading..and of course for the wonderful and the best message! :) im soo happy!!!

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      there is no crazy thought here with me - my most well known world class writer - for you are just simply ...... wonderful! lake erie time ontario canada 10:12pm

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Jo and QudsiaP1 (wow, this is very unique)

      Thank you for reading and for liking my poem :)

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      QudsiaP1 5 years ago

      I love the twist in the poem, how the protagonist goes from a dreamer who is eternally enthusiastic to a heart broken lover. Such range of emotion in one poem! :)

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Unknown, you do beautiful and sad so brilliantly.

      awesome.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Sunshine! Thank you so much!

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      Linda Bilyeu 5 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Up! Awesome! Beautiful! You rock M!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      CAthleena, Lot and Bluesea.. thank you all for the very kind comments.

      @Billy, I know you'll stop by my hub, you always do. Thank you thank you sooo much!!

      I'm so thrilled Ive been included on your hub too!

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      bluesea 5 years ago

      awesome!

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You might want to stop by my hub of today; you are mentioned as you deserve to be.

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      Lot Rillera 5 years ago from Philippines

      i feel the sadness at the end. I love him, but she loves another woman....it seems like that....someday you'll find what meant for you. :) voted up!

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      Cathleena Beams 5 years ago from Lascassas, Tennessee

      Awesome poem of unrequited love. I agree, it is sad, but beautiful. Votes up and shared.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      James..Gypsy..you're the best! Thank you for the inspiring messages!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Such sad yet beautiful words. You expressed this so wonderfully. Passing it on.

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Your writing continues to inspire me and it just keeps getting more beautiful.

      "Until we caught a star

      Far bright enough

      To light our hearts.''

      You have incredible talent. Voted up, shared, beautiful, awesome, and interesting :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Billy, Leigh, Christin, Azlan, Melchi, Joyce, Kashmir or K, Endless sea, Larry, thelyricwriter, bravewarrior, Mhatter, KJ force, and Ann...

      I am sooo thrilled to read your messages. I've read it quite a few times. I love your messages, made me feel great and happy. Thank you for believing in my writes.

      Yes bravewarrior, this is only the footprints of yesterdays.

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      Ann1Az2 5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      unknown spy - A beautiful but sad dream - voted up and beautiful.

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      unknown spy..Love the write...very deep..my words to you, why are you hesitant to pursue what your heart desires ? Next time you ride the " carousel if life" grab the ring and run with it..you desrve happiness as much as anyone..just my " crazy" thought...

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      live your dream no one else can tell you how... only it is possible...

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Beautiful poem, spy. I just hope that the poems you are posting of late are like mine: written many years ago.

      Your poetry is beautiful and so are you. Wrap your arms around yourself and give yourself a hug from me!

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      Pamela Oglesby 5 years ago from United States

      A beautiful dream with heartbreak at the end. The poem was beautiful and I got lost in the beauty of the dream.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      This was very beautiful. I believe many of us have lost a love, so we can relate to your poetry. Beautiful piece.

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      Larry Wall 5 years ago

      As always, you tell a beautiful story in a beautiful manner. God has blessed you with an amazing talent.

      Take care,

      Larry

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      Akhand Pratap SIngh 5 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      Very beautiful, the dream you saw was lovely and your feelings are true the person you love is really lucky and blessed.. so beautifully written down loved it

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi M. Such a wonderful poem written with words that are so meaningful and right from the heart.

      I would love to live but one day in your imagination,but i know i would want to stay there forever. Well done my friend !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Love your poem you've written so well.

      Vote up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      Melanie Chisnall 5 years ago from Cape Town, South Africa

      Lovely story and beautiful words! You are a very talented writer :)

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      Azlan 5 years ago

      I can relate:(,its like my poem to her.Got a heartbreak again reading the ending lines.But on the contrary,your are a fine Poet n Writer.Wonderful hub kutti.

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      Ann-Christin 5 years ago from UK

      What a beautiful poem you have a lovely way with words :)

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      leigh anns page 5 years ago from New Jersey

      Beautiful and romantic. I enjoy reading your work.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Your writing continues to improve and the beauty that is you shines through in each of your words.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi articlesocean, thank you so much for liking my poem!

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      Saira Sheikh 5 years ago from London, United Kingdom

      Wow, it's a beautiful poem! You have great talent in writing poetry ! Love your poem! voted up & beautiful & awesome!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Tony, thank you again :)

      Shiningirisheyes, thank you for this wonderful comment.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      You write such beaautiful poetry and I always enjoy the read.

      Just wonderful

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      beaddve 5 years ago

      You are welcome, unknown spy!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Jan for this wonderful message.

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      Wonderful. The last words had my eyes watering. Really good love poem. Some of the lines were so full of passion; 'When the sun had kissed the silent sea.'

      Lovely.

      Jan

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      beaddve, DS, and Angel...

      Thank you all for these special messages you've left on my hub.

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      This is so romantic and beautiful , voted Up !

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      DS Duby 5 years ago from United States, Illinois

      Very beautiful as usual, you are a very talented writer. Voted up, beautiful and awesome, my friend.

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      beaddve 5 years ago

      A beautiful writing.