ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

Crime Scene

Updated on March 16, 2017

Crime Scene

The crime scene was mainly the car,

with the victim slumped in the backseat,

emotions did not go far,

the body looked like unpackaged meat,

her skirt and bra hiked up to display

a chest and stomach marked by a dozen

or more vertical stab wounds,

the police could feel the heat,

and on the floor of the backseat,

the killer had dumped the contents

of the victim’s purse,

indicating an apparent robbery,

her ghost would curse,

beyond that, there was no physical evidence

in the car,

no fingerprints, no fibers, no hairs,

just exploding emotions, and fears,

no witnesses and no tears.

© 2011 Frank Atanacio

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • LaThing profile image

      LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Oh, my! Another vivid picture of a crime scene..... That really grabs your emotions! Wonderful work, Frank! Voting up and everything.... Take care, buddy!

    • Frank Atanacio profile image
      Author

      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Lathing for voting up and everything LOL

    • Marlin 55 profile image

      Marlin 55 3 years ago from USA

      Another great poem Frank full of imagery that makes me cringe.

    • Fullerman5000 profile image

      Fullerman5000 3 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Great job. This is like a poem for the show the First 48 which I am addicted to. Great work. Simple, yet so impactful. Awesome job.

    • Frank Atanacio profile image
      Author

      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      Marlin thanks so much and you too Fullerman5000

    • justateacher profile image

      LaDena Campbell 3 years ago from Somewhere Over The Rainbow - Near Oz...

      Great imagery as always, Frank - I love how you write in pictures...

    • Frank Atanacio profile image
      Author

      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thank you justateacher :)

    Click to Rate This Article