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Crystal Stream (poem)

Updated on September 22, 2012

Let’s share our secret with this crystal stream

To share with flowers how I love you so

And they’ll scent the breeze so it too will know

Which takes to the clouds just how lovers dream


Then all of our Joy clouds write across sky

Which stars in our heaven twinkle to see

Their whispers the moon glows to set free

As worlds on fire now echoes in reply


Soon flames of sheer passion spread far and wide

As fields of surrender are kissed by its flow

And we are engulfed by all that we know

Once sitting by stream now lost in this tide


But maybe someday we’ll wake from this dream

Let’s share our secret with this crystal stream


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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      How have I not read these. Amazing. jamie

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      Ann1Az2 5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      "Let’s share our secret with this crystal stream," what a great line. I love the imagery.

      Voted up.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      I love the reference to crystal steams - so refreshing and purity of love. Lovely and passionate.

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Only one word needed here:- Beautiful!!!!

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      Will not say anything other than tender and beautiful. Voted up.


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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago

      Beautiful flow Mhatter, really enjoy your style of writing. Another knockout. Voted up, and rating beautiful and awesome.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      How beautiful your crystal stream. Lovely..

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Mh -

      A great poem of lover's bliss. Well done, my friend!

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Such tranquility to share, too, with the lovely picture that you have painted.

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      Sommer Dalton 5 years ago

      Another great hub ! Voted up and more!

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      Linda Crist 5 years ago from Central Virginia


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      Michelle Liew 5 years ago from Singapore

      So In Love is the song I thought of after I read this. A great read, Hatter, as usual.

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Whew!!! Sizzling Mh!!! Lovely. Voted up. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Deborah 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Beautiful MHatt! just loved it! Voted up and shared!