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Cupid strikes!

Updated on August 22, 2014

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  • Aeolian blown

Apples of love

Catered

To my hungry heart

Like

A melody harp

Feeding

The eager ears!


  • Deflating

My ego

Dissolved i

My heroic image

Downsizing

To a sagging balloon

To demonstrate

My inflated love

For the bonding beauty!


  • An aerobic release

Relieves

The stress

Of a suffocated

One-sided love

To ease

The trafficking hearts!


  • An ascent

In a love mound

Witnessed

A deep descent

In my performance

Retarding

My hope and scope

For a productive career!


  • In a reverie,

Roll calling

A list of damsels

Who

Darted my heart

Re-experienced I

The sensation

Of love swings!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thnx bird

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      Malik S Canty 3 years ago from Brooklyn, NY

      Great Piece...Nice images...

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanx deb for ur response!

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      Deborah-Diane 3 years ago from Orange County, California

      Fascinating poetry.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanku ami

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      Amie Butchko 3 years ago from Warwick, NY

      Love your writing!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      my pleasure nght

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      K.A.E Grove 3 years ago from Australia

      this was a lovely read, thank you so much for sharing it

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanx chit

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      Chitrangada Sharan 3 years ago from New Delhi, India

      Beautiful poem, nicely expressed!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanx blo n den

      motivating

      regards

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      Denise Handlon 3 years ago from North Carolina

      I love the imagery of this poem and have to admit, I voted it UP and funny. I enjoyed the visions of the deflated ego and the list of damsels you 'roll called'. Yes, love swings...in all directions. Enjoyed!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Lovely poem.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanx ed n jo

      let ur words echo in my ears for inspiration

      regards

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Beautiful poetry...well done sujaya

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Truly beautiful sujaya and here's to so many more gems from you.

      Voted up and thoroughly enjoyed.

      Eddy.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      big thanks kid

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      kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Lovely! Have a great day!