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Short Story: Daddy's Love Part Ten The Disapperence!

Updated on January 12, 2014

The Disappearance!

It has been over a week now since this incident occurred. No one but the Pastor was able to see the Jefferson’s and for the past two days no one but the FBI and the Jefferson’s had see the Pastor. Now it’s beginning to look as if this entire thing was turning out to be even worse than just a double murder, a kidnapping of a young lady and her loving parents falling seriously ill as a result.

The highest ranking Chinese officials were putting serious pressure, on the government, searching for some credible word on what’s really going on in the investigation of regarding their colleague’s parents, who were both killed, shot in that restaurant.

As difficult and relentless as they were in putting that much pressure on the state department, there was much more pressure building up in this part of the country, and it was getting worse by the minute, since the announcement that this case has now been upgraded to one of National Security.

The media was preparing and looking forward towards having a field day over at the hospital, but the news went around that the Jefferson’s were no longer at this hospital, but since there was no one around, that could confirm of deny that situation. The media was getting a little uneasy. They have been there for days no news, the very same thing was going on at the police department, same in the Jefferson’s neighborhood. Everyone was being told that the FBI was now in charge of the investigations, and that’s whom they are supposed to contact.

They were determined not to leave the hospital grounds, but since the case had gotten to be so notorious at this time, they were now asking the police who were guarding the very front of the hospital and they were also ordered to direct everyone to the FBI.

It was understood that there were quite a few high levels meetings, being conducted at this present time and a news conference will be held at a venue to be announced, so until then all news people and their personnel are to vacate the hospital grounds. This was something which appeared quite suspicious to the news people, all of a sudden, no cameras were allowed on, or in the Hospital grounds, for the risk of criminal trespass, and disruption of private business, the barricades were now being taken down, and they were told there will be no more warnings.

The Police were ordered to arrest anyone harassing the workers, and anyone carrying cameras or camera equipment, into the building. From there on, it was a very quiet nigh, one which caught just about everyone that was related to this case y surprise.

In the meantime the there were five news vans moving around from side to side they were leaving and coming again, when suddenly the Jefferson’s home, was going up in flames. One of the van drivers called 911 to report the fire and was told that someone already called. It seems as if the fire started somewhere on the inside back part of the home, and quickly spread through the entire home. Someone it seemed mysteriously called 911, and there were trucks already on the way, you could hear those sirens, and loud fire truck horns, as they were racing through the streets heading in this direction.

There once again in as many days this neighborhood is again being awakened by the sound of sirens and other emergency vehicles, as the neighbors were starting to come from every direction. But the news vans that were already there, knowing that they would have to move shortly, had all already found themselves parking and with cameras out they were enjoying some action. But the police had already been ordered to block the entrances.

It was a pretty intense blaze and the area was buzzing with endless activity, there were Helicopters buzzing above and lights flashing in every direction…..

To be cont………Bless:

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Part (11)

The news conference!



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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks teaches. Always a pleasure, and sincere thanks for the positiveness.

      God bless;

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Excitement builds! I love the music as a background to the reading...great selection for the hub!

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks Cardisa . And that dialogue I believe will hold you tighter , I got the picture and thanks you because you did stress on that.

      I feel your passion in that piece about yard , proud of you Lady.

      I am peeled for this round that's coming up, and you should see some great stuff , not on HP , PRIVATELY !

      AFTER # 300.

      As always I thank you for being there.


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      Carolee Samuda 5 years ago from Jamaica

      And the suspense continues. Very good story Sky, only problem I have is the lack of dialogue but I guess that will come with practice. But good going.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks billy for what I already see ass great and truthful questions and I will share with you.

      Bless forever grateful

      Give Thanks.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you Rose , and a great question ? I can sun it up quickly, but I won't because the story itself is there , the idea is inside . So I will promise you a great Gods fearing finale . Because 300 hubs is fast approaching and where there is the plan, so I have to cut it short. Possibly two parts.

      Thanks for your great follow always a pleasure.


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Well that was thrilling. Where is everybody and why burn down the house?

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      So my friend, how do you feel about this story? Is it what you imagined? Are you proud of it? What was your goal when you started out writing it? I'll be interested in knowing the process and your thoughts. My thoughts will come when it is finished. Peace!