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Dancing Petals

Updated on August 21, 2015
the ever watchful moon
the ever watchful moon | Source

The feel of it on my skin

the scent left behind

the sky above is the witness

and the moon alone is always watching

with each passing night

it whispers to each star

“have you ever seen so truer love than that?”


As each petal falls down

and covers every corner

so the scent is blown away

by an angry and greedy wind

the sweet perfume that used to calm me

is now flying out of reach


The moon is always watching

but now wonders what is wrong

for the petals flying freely

seem to her to be…

the perfect song

falling petals
falling petals | Source
colorful bed
colorful bed | Source

But yet I wonder,

having flowers wither

is something sad to watch

but still, if they did not die

how would they have a chance

to create a new flower?

with new colors and sweet scent

to come and paint our days?

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    • anemixflarie profile image
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      Anemix 2 years ago

      Thank you very much Gypsy Rose!! I am glad you liked it! :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Lovely poetry with nice imagery of flowers.

    • anemixflarie profile image
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      Anemix 2 years ago

      Thank you very much Eric!

      Audrey I am glad you liked it

      Whonu thank you and blessings to you too

      Juneaukid I am glad it reminded you of happy times

      tobusiness thank you for your kind words!

      I appreciate all of your comments :)

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 2 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      Beautiful and profound, it flows like a gentle mountain stream.

    • juneaukid profile image

      Richard Francis Fleck 2 years ago from Denver, Colorado

      A lovely poem--reminds me of cherry blossom season when we lived in Japan.

    • whonunuwho profile image

      whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States

      Nice work my friend and blessings. whonu

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Wonderful imagery here!

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      Eric Wayne Flynn 2 years ago from Providence, Rhode Island

      Pleasant, voted up and beautiful.

      EWF

    • anemixflarie profile image
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      Anemix 2 years ago

      Thank you very much Frank!! I really appreciate it! :)

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      very poetic..love the streaming words... flows wonderfully voted up and awesome :)

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