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Dark Places

Updated on February 25, 2011

Dark places

empty spaces

passage ways

mind frays

brain waves

cool caves

blind mind

exit sign

escape again

not insane

find a rock

no talk

who to blame

it's not the same

changed mind

auto rewind

saved from

only some

hurt beside me

and here now we

will travel

only several

dark places


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    • Awful Poet profile image

      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      I just love the format here..

      Well done

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      Sky321 7 years ago from Canada

      I'm thankful that there is always a light. Thanks for reading Valerie.

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      valeriebelew 7 years ago from Metro Atlanta, GA, USA

      Yes, we travel through dark places, but there is always a light at the end of the tunnel. (:v

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      Sky321 7 years ago from Canada

      Thanks for reading lifegate.

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      Lifegate 7 years ago

      Another excellent write! Very moving and identifiable. Thanks.

    • Sky321 profile image

      Sky321 7 years ago from Canada

      Thanks guys, Your comments are always a blessing.

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      Martie Coetser 7 years ago from South Africa

      And sometimes you struggle to find your way out of those dark spaces! Voted up!

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      "Quill" 7 years ago

      Deep makes one think of many of the places we have found ourselves over the years... te greatest beauty is there is always light ahead. Excellent writing...

      Hugs and Blessings

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      ama83 7 years ago from San Jose, CA

      Great poem! Creative and deep.

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      kennynext 7 years ago from Everywhere

      It seems like sometimes we are always in the dark. Great write.