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Darling Surrender (poem)

Updated on July 15, 2013

My darling surrender to here and now

Where heartbeats and kisses build what will be

And eyes softly closed will teach use to see

Set all else aside let feelings avow


Let us not hold back what yearns to be free

Flowing with moments as dreams show us how

A glimpse of forever will time endow

My darling surrender and walk with me


Let us be a cloud a whisper a breeze

Let us be a stream the rushes the scent

Let us be the dawn refreshment anew


This moment is ours to partake of these

Let us not ponder where wishes went

My darling surrender as shall I too


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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      Ok, I am currently working on 99 love Sonnets about my relationship with my wife, I think you may have read the first two. It is not an original idea but seems to be a repeated Sonnet theme by some of the greats. I hope that we can talk about our journeys with the Sonnet as I go. Jamie

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      Ann1Az2 5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Sensuous and romantic. Great picture and the music is fabulous.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      One word - fantastic and romantic. passing it on.

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      Patricia Scott 5 years ago from sunny Florida

      mhatter...Let go of whatever holds us back and go toward the sweet abandon. You said this so well...this has been a road I have traveled sometime in my distant past. This is a poem to read and reread.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This is truly the way that true love and trust will come to us.

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      Ann-Christin 5 years ago from UK

      This is my kind of poem:) Voted up and sharing.

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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Theres nothing better than the feeling of letting you inhibitions go, and letting nature take its course.

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      Randi Benlulu 5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Beautiful! well done! voted up and awesome!

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      Valleypoet 5 years ago

      Good work my friend, enjoyed this:-))

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      This has to be one of the best poems I've read. Simply beautiful and full of love and passion.


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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 5 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      Surrender! Yes, surrender to LOVE! Beautiful, romantic poem. The picture is erotic and lovely, it is sending my imaginations beyond the rainbow's end. I played the soothing video while I read the poem again.

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      Ryem 5 years ago from Maryland

      The feeling of letting down all of your guards and letting love take over is entirely beautiful. You've put those feelings into a perfect poem. Voted up

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      Deborah 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Mhatter, you've done it again. You are so creative, this is very beautiful. Perfect song as always, and a great romantic photo! Voted up! You still Rock!