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Dawn Comes, a Haiku Poem

Updated on October 18, 2013

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Dawn Comes, Slowly

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Dawn Comes, a Haiku Poem

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The dark

in the morning

covers the world around

and I wait

for the sun

to come

to life


~ ~ ~

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      Laura Schneider 

      4 years ago from Minneapolis-St. Paul, Minnesota, USA

      Haha okay, then I shall keep my secret, at least for now.

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      John Hansen 

      4 years ago from Queensland Australia

      I see the first comment was 11 months ago, so I guess it's older than that, but I have just found you so it doesn't matter.

    • Laura Schneider profile imageAUTHOR

      Laura Schneider 

      4 years ago from Minneapolis-St. Paul, Minnesota, USA

      Thanks! I'm trying to decide if I should confess how long ago I wrote that or let it stand as-is. Your thoughts, everyone?

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      John Hansen 

      4 years ago from Queensland Australia

      This poem describes perfectly the coming of dawn in so few words. Well done Laura.

    • Laura Schneider profile imageAUTHOR

      Laura Schneider 

      5 years ago from Minneapolis-St. Paul, Minnesota, USA

      cleaner3/Michael--I'm flattered! Thanks for following me and I hope my work lives up to your expectations. Cheers! --LS

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      cleaner3 

      5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      beautiful... glad I saw your remark on Faith's post .. Now I have found you and want to see "your work"

      this is where I want to go eventually... but I like to try new forms ..

      Michael

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      Laura Schneider 

      5 years ago from Minneapolis-St. Paul, Minnesota, USA

      Good morning, Sunny River just north of Reality! Thank you so much for commenting on my little haiku. Every once in awhile something will just get under my skin and I know it will come out through writing, like my appreciation for the lovely start to each new day in this little poem.

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      Sunny River 

      5 years ago from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality

      Loved it. Sunrise is one of my favorite times of the day.

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      Laura Schneider 

      5 years ago from Minneapolis-St. Paul, Minnesota, USA

      Thank you so much for your generous praise, pstraubie48, and for voting and sharing this little poem further. You have a lovely weekend, too, and thanks for the angels! :-)

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      Patricia Scott 

      5 years ago from sunny Florida

      Love this....every day, waiting for the sun to 'come to life' so another new day can spring forth and open itself to me. Awesome.

      Thanks for sharing Voted up and shared

      Have a lovely weekend

      Sending Angels your way :) ps

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      Laura Schneider 

      5 years ago from Minneapolis-St. Paul, Minnesota, USA

      Thank you, wetnosedogs! I like all kinds of poems when I'm reading them, but somehow the simple meaningful ones are the ones that stick in my head and still mean the most to me a week or year later. Have a great evening! Thanks for commenting!

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      Laura Schneider 

      5 years ago from Minneapolis-St. Paul, Minnesota, USA

      Thanks, DDE! I appreciate you stopping to leave a comment. Cheers!

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      wetnosedogs 

      5 years ago from Alabama

      Simple and great. Love it.

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      Devika Primić 

      5 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      The sun brightens the day a lovely meaning to this poem.

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