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Dear Unfortunate

Updated on August 16, 2013

Dear Unfortunate

I sit around in negativity,

Tried to hit that positivity,

But I had a guy calling me down.

It was like a hound,

Following me around trying to rip me apart,

Right from the start.


Questions go through my mind,

Not wanting to know the answer, I'm bind.

Trying to think through-out time,

Finally I realize he's blind.

Not knowing the truth.

I only did good for him it's true.

Picked him up with my wisdom,

He still hits me with criticism.

But I can see he's breaking through with the good,

So I forgive him like I should.

Still pesters me around with falsehood,

But I know I'll move through as I would.

So stop trying to move around with that fake energy,

And start seeing real clearly.

See me for what I am.

Not a man through the lens of a false crown.


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    • PoeticPhilosophy profile image

      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      Thank you's for your comments, yes negativity is hard but in some situations and circumstances you must learn to deal with it. All the best.

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      Writer Fox 4 years ago from the wadi near the little river

      Interesting reflections. I tend to just avoid people like that.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this reflection. I have been brainwashed by an oil company in the concept of "gifts".