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The Diamond Sun

Updated on November 19, 2012

When I saw it in the sky
there it stood... oh so high


In my minds eye, I could not cry
I wanted it... so I tried to fly

I looked up at The Diamond Sun
As I watched ...I saw the shiny run


can't stand up... I begin to crawl
I couldn't... overcome it all


Running, trotting close behind
Say the words... I need to find

And most of the lonely time
Love is very hard to find

when it is right in front of you
but could not see all... thru the blue
So you have to wait
for the next gate
to open up and let me bound
for love.. it cannot be found

love is a magical moment in time

that happens only in a rhyme
a touch of moon...

a dab of water on your head
hands in tight grip ...

words on a page to be read

I lost my love..while on the run

When I looked up at The Diamond Sun

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      teaches, thank you for the comments. yes the sunset is very romantic along with a beach and the sea there is only love left to fill the story.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      I love your poem and the photos added as enhancement. There's just something about a sunset that is so appropriate as a backdrop for romance.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you blossom , you have a nice weekend.!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A lovely flight of fancy in poetic form. Enjoyed it very much.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie Lynnley, thank you for the visit and the comments. happy thanks giving to you and your family . be safe.

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      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      A beautiful flow of words about love hard to find. Very good.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      La thing, thank You for the comments and the visit. Happy you liked my work . hope to see more from you soon.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Beautiful poem, Mike! Love the flow, and the diamond sun :)

      Voting up and awesome.....

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      dghbrh, thank you for the kind words. you have a way with words.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Wowww....a very nice poem.....Its glittering like a diamond all the way...Votes way upward and sharing it too.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      Faith Reaper, glad you like the poem . you have become my most loyal follower. I appreciate the support and inspiration you give me. Thank you .

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Very, very beautiful.

      Vote way up and sharing.

      In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you hatter, glad you came along for the ride.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this flight of delight.

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