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Don´t Give Up! (Poem)

Updated on January 21, 2016



Not over yet...

When you feel

as if you were about

to fall into pieces,

Please… Don't give up!

Just.. don't give up!

I know that's an easy thing to say,

but, at times, it's so hard to do!

At times of the night,

Sometimes, darkness hits us hard,

making us wonder

if the pain is going to end

anytime soon.

We do feel weak,

as our eyes are unable to see

the light surrounding us.

We might feel as if our life

were about to end.

But not everything is over yet.

You have not reached

the end of the way yet.


Still a Chance

You still have a chance

to fix those bitter mistakes

from a distant past.

So, please, don't give up!

Just.. don't give up!

You, more than anyone,

deserve to experiment

all of those little pleasures of life.

You are a true warrior,

just for being alive.

So, don't let anyone

tell you otherwise.

Live, just to enjoy

the sweet caress of the wind

all over your skin.

You don't need to shower

in buckets of money

to enjoy this wonderful ride.

The only thing that you need

is the ability to be happy

with your existence,

learning to enjoy

any moment of happiness

So.. please… don't give up!

There's a reason for you to be here,

and you'll find it sooner than you think.

So, don't give up!



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    • pjdorantes profile imageAUTHOR

      Patricia J Dorantes 

      3 years ago from Mexico City

      So glad you liked it!

    • AngelaJJ profile image


      3 years ago

      Heart-warming poem... :)

    • pjdorantes profile imageAUTHOR

      Patricia J Dorantes 

      3 years ago from Mexico City

      Thanks for reading! And so glad you liked this poem

    • swalia profile image

      Shaloo Walia 

      3 years ago from India

      An inspirational message in your lines. Well-written!

    • pjdorantes profile imageAUTHOR

      Patricia J Dorantes 

      3 years ago from Mexico City

      So glad you liked it

    • whonunuwho profile image


      3 years ago from United States

      A wonderful message of hope. Thank you for sharing. whonu


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