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Don't Let Me Fall For You

Updated on April 29, 2013

I catch my breath

When you are near me.

A subtle glance from you

Making me know that it's me whom you fancy.

Your smile each day

Wipe my tears away.

A minute with you

feels like an hour or two.

I'll never forget the first time you said I'm beautiful--

That I'm beautiful though I am simple.

You changed my mind--the way I think about who you are.

You did. You do. You will.

Unfortunately, she's waiting for you

From a million miles away.

And I don't want to be the reason

for her to go away.

So I beg you...

Just leave me here.

Be rude; Be bad; Don't be so nice.

Because this is the first time

that I feel I am human.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      What a beautiful poem.. it is so nice meeting you.. I will share you awesome poetry on Facebook

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      I can feel the pain in your words Valerire.. great poem voted up :)

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      Awesome depiction of raw, emotional feelings. Loved it! Voted up and awesome! : )

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      This was really good, very well written and completly relatable! Amazing job!

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      Valorie Esquilona 4 years ago from Philippines

      Thank you so much my friends, for appreciating my hub. I am really heartbroken right now,haha just kidding. I have realized that not everything that we want could happen--that even both of you like each other, it doesn't mean you can always be together. falling in love is such a complicated situation.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Powerful and true emotion wrapped up in a expressive poem.

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      Valorie Esquilona 4 years ago from Philippines

      Thanks Gypsy, for always appreciating my hubs..you're such a great friend here.

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