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Door To Goodbye (poem)

Updated on August 27, 2014

Can you see the door close to our goodbye

So many and more the tears put away

So many before our hearts learned to stray

And no one was sure of the reason why

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No time to explore what words had to say

No time to re-shore what pain put awry

The times that we swore to give it a try

Have led to the door before us today

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Those reasons galore now fall from our lips

Wild passions now sore such flames to ignite

To even a score uncertain as this

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And into this war a stranger known slips

A chance to restore our reason to fight

And see that this door is closed with a kiss

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      Dorothy saltel 3 years ago

      lovely poem and great song, I danced to this many times. always a nice adventure. Thank-You.

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      Kaili Bisson 4 years ago from Canada

      The only other singer who could convey more feeling in a song than Roy Orbison was Patsy Cline. A well-chosen video to accompany your poem.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      beautifully done

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      snowdrops 5 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      Beautiful yet sad. Thumbs up!

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Mhatter99

      You words beautifully capture the heartbreak of goodbye.

      Voted up and away!

      Take care :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Goodbyes are always saddest when the door closes. This was lovely and with Roy bringing on the tears well what can I say super. Passing it on.

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      Beautifully sad poem on love that ends.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This was so beautifully done.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      and so 1+1=?

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      anglnwu 5 years ago

      Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Good poem although rather sad.

      Voted up and interesting.

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      A wistful good-bye, a door we don't want to open.

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      Michele Travis 5 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      You write very good poems. I wish I could. Some of us have talent, and some of us do not. You are one of those who do have talent. Voted up.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Very relatable write.

      Thanks for this.