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Down with love!

Updated on July 24, 2015
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Year after year

your very own fleecing beauty

in the saddle

saddles

my heart in despair;

more pretty you become

more setbacks on the rise

in my career

leading to desperation;

gloomy

despondency

downhearted

downcast

disconsolate

depressed

dejected

discouraged

discharged

maybe the words

associated with my disposition

at present;

dissemble not innocence

or

ignorance

at my stake;

boot me

with oodles of love

surpassing your asset

and

cast a spell

over my life

for a jolly jouncing jolty ride!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Vensir Gyp Blo Dan for your lovely comments

    • Venkatachari M profile image

      Venkatachari M 2 years ago from Hyderabad, India

      Very interesting.

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Nicely penned.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Clever again!

    • Dana Tate profile image

      Dana Tate 2 years ago from LOS ANGELES

      Nice work as always.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Lar

    • Larry Rankin profile image

      Larry Rankin 2 years ago from Oklahoma

      Beautiful poem.