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Dream On (poem)

Updated on November 15, 2012

We danced on clouds which whisked us far away

That sleeping lovers hopes might dawn anew

A vision cast to set a heart to stray

Dream on young dreamers show them what is true


We laced each kiss with mists of what will be

That from this mist might blossom long lost tune

Forgotten in a younger memory

Dream on young dreamers shepherds of the moon


Through shrouds of doubt in things that didn’t last

Through shattered trust in what was sold as real

Through fears of mistakes surging from the past

Through lovers’ hearts that lost their youthful zeal


We chanced a promise in each other’s eyes

That other lights which long for flight won’t fade

Our love will show us where tomorrow lies

Dream on young dreamers through the realms love made


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Lovely sentiments and great video. Passing this on.

    • Faith Reaper profile image

      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Very lovely. Yes, dream on for love will show where tomorrow lies.

      Voted up Very lovely video

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Absolutely wonderful, Martin. The lead photo was perfect, too.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      You definitely understand all aspects to relationships.

      "Through shattered trust in what was sold as real." So relateable.

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      PurvisBobbi44 5 years ago from Florida


      So delightfully sweet with a mixture of time---time when young love matures into a love of a life time---that when it is the sweetest.


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      Michele Travis 5 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Beautiful, and lovely full of dreams.

      Voted up.

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      Simply beautiful! The words so endearing. I felt very peaceful after reading it. Voted up,


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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Beautiful, MH! What would life be with out dreams...... Very smooth, and romantic! Voting up and everything!

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      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Nice work,Mhatter, you are in control of expression and emotions run away in te night. Very well done and so tells of the love shared by the young and old, alike and how it is this passion that so drives us all onward and fearlessly into the shadows cast by a watchful moon.