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Dream We Shared (poem)

Updated on August 22, 2012

Another dream we shared last night

We held for some kisses invite

We danced for the starlight’s delight

And there in this time all was right

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And there every thought was of you

Every song in the breeze knew it too

Each heartbeat repeated it’s true

This secret that everything knew

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Here we were that warm glow mid night

The whispered enchantment cast too

The wishes of spring had come true

And there in this kiss all was right

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And as my dreams drifted in you

Was something we didn’t invite

Some jealous wind challenged delight

And threatened the world that we knew

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We wandered in search of what’s right

Through shadows which held our delight

Another dance we chanced invite

Another dream we shared last night

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      Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

      I love how this poem flows. Kind of like the rhythm in a dance?

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So lovely and lyrical.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      was it a dream..a fantasy...a reality? Your poetry is just sooo...readable and unique, M!

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      Glimmer Twin Fan 4 years ago

      Just beautiful mhatter...

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      A wonderfully romantic piece---

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      And time stands still for the beauty in this night...

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Wow, everyone thought this should be a song, but the first thing that came to my mind was Fairytales!! :)) I must be weried.......

      This was beautiful, a beautiful dream and the poem too. Enjoyed it, voting up!

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Should be a song, like all the rest are saying!! Thanks, hatter.

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      sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      Amazing poem and perfect video. This Dream We Shared is indeed a song.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Wow I agree this would make a beautiful song blessings .....Debbie

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      Lovely poem. Dreams that sometimes come true and others that leave us mystified as to what they were all about! I instantly thought of Roy Orbison's In Dreams; which is a favourite of mine.

      This poem is beautifully written and I also agree it would sound really good to music.

      Jan

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very beautiful and I agree with Diana, it would make great song lyrics. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Deborah 4 years ago from Las Vegas

      Mhatter, this is very lyrical and could be put to music! Beautiful... love it. Voted up and shared!

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      Diana L Pierce 4 years ago from Potter County, Pa.

      This poem would make good song lyrics. Beautiful poem, Mhatter99.