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Dreams Can Come True (limerick)

Updated on June 18, 2013

The moment she kissed him she knew

That one’s dreams can really come true

This moment in time

Was proof less sublime

Her nightmare of slime covered goo


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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Ewwwwww! LOL Great one!

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      Dana Strang 4 years ago from Ohio

      ick icky ick! how do you come up with these?! love it.

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Another good one, if a little sticky. You are so prolific lately!

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      Chris Mills 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO until the end of June, 2017

      They don't all turn out happily ever after do they? Good one, thanks fro the laugh. But don't think we miss the talent it takes, just because we are laughing.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      lol laughing so cute good nite my friend


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      Ghaelach 4 years ago

      A goodnight from Deborah, and a goodmorning from Ghaelach.

      An ickkkky limerick this morning Martin, to which I think you've been working with "Super Glue"

      LOL Ghaelach

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      Donna Brown 4 years ago from Alton, Missouri

      Oh, the disappointments of a first kiss! Well done!

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Ugh! Gross! funny!

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      This one surely tickled my funny bone today!

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Ewwww! He's one of those with white stuff stuck to the sides of his mouth. Yuck!

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      I had that experience once! Up and funny...

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      Tonette Fornillos 4 years ago from The City of Generals

      Oh meoww.... hehe... where's that kiss... careful!Lol.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Yuckie Doo, Phew..Hee..

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Oops. That was one icky risk. Thanks for sharing, Hatter!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      OOOO Gooo lol

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Oh dear, the earth obviously didn't move, maybe next time? :). Mhatter, thanks for taking me back....NOT! :0

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      QudsiaP1 4 years ago

      Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :P

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      I swear that my exact comment was going to be "Ewwwwwwww....


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      Dana Strang 4 years ago from Ohio

      i came back to this one again to check out the comments, i am laughing soooo hard! it is one thing to write a great limerick, it is another thing all together ot get such a flood of great responses... WELL DONE!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      That was excellent!

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Hahaha! Yes a nightmare is a dream that may come true.

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