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Drooling on love!

Updated on October 7, 2015
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Ramifying my lone heart out

to the hearts of lovely ladies

(fair and pretty

they should be)

maintained I

the image of Romeo innumero

love reigning rampant

in the lad in me,

ramshackling relationship

mattered not to me;

all that was relevant,

my folks,

was the ransom number,

ramstam I am

you feel

you may think me so

but who cares

as long as I have my say!

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    • manatita44 profile image

      manatita44 19 months ago from london

      Interesting one. I note the shift ..

      The poetry is still 'cool.'

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      sujaya venkatesh 19 months ago

      tnq Man

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      Alka Narula 19 months ago from INDIA

      Interesting .

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      sujaya venkatesh 19 months ago

      tnq Alk

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      FlourishAnyway 19 months ago from USA

      you have an unusual way with words

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 19 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Enjoyed this.

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      sujaya venkatesh 19 months ago

      tnq Flo Gyp

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      Devika Primić 19 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A lovely photo presented with good poetry.

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      Deb Hirt 19 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Yes, interesting. You have deviated from your usual style.

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      sujaya venkatesh 19 months ago

      tnq Av DDE

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      Dianna Mendez 18 months ago

      Romeo's words indeed!

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      sujaya venkatesh 18 months ago

      oh Juliet!

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