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Duck on My Roof (Haiku)

Updated on May 14, 2015
Duck on my roof...
Duck on my roof...
If you're lost...not a disgrace...
If you're lost...not a disgrace...
We just can't quack like you...
We just can't quack like you...
We all just walk around...wearing our silly grin...
We all just walk around...wearing our silly grin...
Time to rejoin your feathered friends...
Time to rejoin your feathered friends...



Small duck on my roof,

You're too high for me to reach.

Are you taking pause,

Just too tired to make a speech?


The roof of my house,

Not a very ducky place.

Did you lose your way,

Would not be such a disgrace?


Are you observing,

How us human critters act,

Not so charming, we,

All do speak without one quack.


After your short rest,

Perhaps you'll rejoin your flock.

Never grace our roof,

Where you received such a shock.


Our human race, odd,

Compared to your feathered friends,

Not a one may fly,

Walk... wearing our silly grins.







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      Nithya Venkat 23 months ago from Dubai

      Great haiku, beautifully penned!

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      whonunuwho 23 months ago from United States

      Thank you much my friend. whonu

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      Faith Reaper 23 months ago from southern USA

      Oh, what delightful haiku! This one made me smile a lot. Love what you have written as captions under your photos too.

      Up ++++ pinning and sharing

      God bless you

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      Shauna L Bowling 23 months ago from Central Florida

      How odd, but exciting, to find a duck on your roof! Inspiration comes in many forms. This is fun, whonu!

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      whonunuwho 23 months ago from United States

      Thanks Faith Reaper and bravewarrior for your nice comments and support. whonu

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      manatita44 23 months ago from london

      Sweet Bro, Cute poem. Higher blessings.

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      whonunuwho 23 months ago from United States

      Thank you my friend. whonu

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      The Examiner-1 23 months ago

      That was wonderful whonunuwho, I loved it. It had a bit of humor to it even though I read the serious side. I had a hawk on my garage roof once. I do not know whether I would rather have the hawk or the duck. I voted it up, shared and pinned it.

      Kevin

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      whonunuwho 23 months ago from United States

      Thank you my friend and blessings.whonu

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      Mary Craig 23 months ago from New York

      A duck on your roof, who knew (pun or no pun)? A great subject leading to a great haiku. Fun to read and interesting to ponder what a duck might think of us.

      Voted up, funny, and interesting.

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      whonunuwho 23 months ago from United States

      This was certainly a first for me. Thanks for the nice comment my friend. whonu

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      peachy 23 months ago from Home Sweet Home

      so cute, ducks do fly in flocks don't they? Must be tired of flying

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      whonunuwho 23 months ago from United States

      As a wildlife painter I've grown accustomed to following and understanding my feathered subjects. This was a first for me and the next day he was gone. Just taking a rest break. whonu

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