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My proposal poem

Updated on June 17, 2013

lovely face radiating in the sun

beautiful eyes a window to the soul

realizing my heart has come undone

feeling my body losing all control

voice, soothing like that of an angel choir

a slight shy smile that removes all the pain

finding my life's one and only desire

understanding within all I have to gain

two souls slowly uniting as if one

two hearts begin beating in unison

our life together has only begun

with time love will continue to blossom

in your warmth I can safely fall asleep

with you by my side my life is complete



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    • Rabidwombat profile image

      Rabidwombat 4 years ago

      Thank you for the vote and share as well as the comment. While I myself have been known to use the occasional foul word, I find that for the purpose of proposing these things are rather ineffective. lol

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      John Roberts 4 years ago from South Yorkshire, England

      Absolutely beautiful, Rabidwombat. Much more fanciful if I were doing it - it'd contain all kinds of vulgar language, brawling and maiming. It's elegance like this though that reminds me I am a human being, not an animal.

      Voted up, beautiful and shared - 280-odd people are about to see what I have, and I hope many more do too.