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Echo From The Clouds (tanka)

Updated on August 27, 2013

Was it all worth it

Came an echo from the clouds

Floating past the day

Which a dream was built upon

Of another special time


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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      I felt power in those words. I applaud you.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Poignant, for sure!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia


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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Deep and profound.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Another gem and thanks for sharing.


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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Amazing tanka.

      Your words whisper an ever taunting question, "Was it worth it?"

      The jury is still out on that one.

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada


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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Dreams of another special time. Fulfulled or unfulfilled?

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      For me, I would have to say it was...worth it.

      Hopefully upon reflection it was for you to and for others.

      Angels are on the way to you this morning ps

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      yess.. very deep .. had to climb out of this ..!