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Electric Fingers

Updated on February 28, 2012
Touched from littledan77 Source: flickr.com
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Touch from JohnyBlaze/DeSnor Source: flickr.com
Touch from JohnyBlaze/DeSnor Source: flickr.com
Passionate Couple from Xmybox Source: flickr.com
Passionate Couple from Xmybox Source: flickr.com

Electric Fingers

By Tony DeLorger © 2011


Electric fingers forever searching,

yearning for delicate touch,

familiar lines, curves,

leading into deep recesses,

plump and warm, inviting.

Eyes closed in blissful abandon,

guided by memories,

imbued by surrendered love,

each cell responsive,

each breath cut short in passion,

writhing focus.

Words fade as bodies revive,

the deepest core of being,

melding thought and purpose,

flesh and emotions,

exquisite pleasured pain.

When touch rises,

each nerve alive with intent,

lips find lips, out of darkness bliss,

and the swell of passion

takes flight on the crest of waves,

each one building,

until in quivering, stammering surrender

love ignites,

and like the birth of a star,

a flash of intense light pervades life,

and love is released,

two souls as one.


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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks carcro, kind words. I'm glad you appreciate my work. Thanks alot.

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      Paul Cronin 5 years ago from Winnipeg

      I can take lessons from you on how to write, thanks Tony, nice!

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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks DimitriLive, Glad you liked it. great line 'it hurts so good'- I'm sure its a song lyric.

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      DimitriLive 5 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      Good stuff--"Pleasured Pain" Sometimes it just hurts so good.Thanks.

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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks raciniwa, glad you do.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      wow...as intense as the writer...i do love the passion portrayed by your poem...

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      lyns 5 years ago from USA

      Your welcome thanks for sharing...

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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks lyns, glad you appreciated it. Thanks for reading and your comment.

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      lyns 5 years ago from USA

      Very nice poem full of emotion, voted up, awesome, interesting

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      Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks klanguedoc, it's rewarding to know you enjoy them so much. Thanks for your support. Take care.

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      Kevin Languedoc 5 years ago from Canada

      Tony, your hubs are always so full of imagery and emotion. A pure pleasure to read.

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