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Illusion,Conclusion,Solution,Elusion

Updated on November 14, 2013
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Retired from Med profession, published author/ journalist, Researching Alternative Rx drugs & Disorders. Poems ,Quotes on Life

IS HE REALLY UNDER WATER ? or is it an illusion ?

Treasure the gifts in life..... but more important....... Cherish them....
Treasure the gifts in life..... but more important....... Cherish them.... | Source

Taking Charge of your Optional Choices....

You trusted him…

He let you down...

You wore a smile...

He wore a frown...

You gave your heart...

And he took it..

You spoke the truth...

He lied a bit...

You walked the walk...

And he talked and balked...

You believed in bliss..

He could care less...

And yet when you gave your word...

He didn’t listen, and said he never heard...

The goals that you had set...

He never understood and yet...

He continued to up root your life ...

With constant stress and lots of strife...

You strived to be your best, then it came...

When you decided to changed up your game...

Finally you got it and came to the conclusion...

That this relationship and was just an illusion...

So you came up with the conclusion...

And you decided to do an elusion...

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      DDE...Glad you enjoy my writes...almost everything I write has come from what I live and observe either to me or others...at present time I am just trying to get ack on my feet again...it is slowly getting there..but oh so S L O W..........

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      You write with such great expressions and share your work so beautifully thanks

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      lovedoctor926..thanks for your vote up...yep that's me no mincing words...have a great Monday...

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      Awesome! You cut right through the chase. voting up!

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      TToombs08...yup a more common characteristic than naught..thanks for comment

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      Terrye Toombs 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      Beautifully done, KJ! I think most of us can relate to this. :)

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      travmaj...thank you for your comments..glad that you enjoyed, I try to put my mind thoughts out there for others and hope they can see they're not alone and there are other options...have a great week-end

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      travmaj 4 years ago from australia

      Yes and Yes - how true this is - and how easy to go on accepting -trusting, smiling, hoping...I admire the way you conclude - very satisfying. Thanks for this. Awesome and Interesting.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      cherylone...Glad you liked the poem..a very close to my heart person is going through this very situation and it tears me up to just stand by and watch and speaking out is inappropriate . She finally came to her senses, but, it took a toll on her

      defenses..she is sensitive and now pensive...appreciate your comment.

      Have a Happy Thanksgiving

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      Cheryl Simonds 4 years ago from Connecticut

      Great poem, I love the part where you "pulled and elusion". You always write things that make me think and dig deep. I love it!

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      heavenleigh707..So glad you liked and enjoyed my poem..thank you for the vote and share..hope you check out some of my others..

      CloudExplorer..Thank you for the up vote..and your comment regarding the flow and style..have you checked out some of my other writes?

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      This is a cool poem with truly awesome word play that definitely draws on the reality of a fictitious character who only cares for self, wow! nice flow and smooth style of the iambic here.

      Thumbs up and out!

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      Heaven L Burkes 4 years ago from The Invincible Heart of Neverland

      KJ! Force is right! Wow!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE it! Thank you! Voted up and sharing the hell outta this! Great job!

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99...Faith Reaper..Btrbell..shiningirisheyes...Thank you all for the wonderful comments on this hub..situation is someone near and dear to me is having issues with this and I am working it out in my own mind, because sometimes advise given may come across as to preachy..?you know you can lead a horse to water, but you can't make him drink it...trust me I have been there too..fiesty little devil...thanks for the HB..FR..

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Wow KJ! You wrote a prophetic piece here! I feel like I walked and experienced every word. Outstanding. It is poetry such as this that makes me so happy to be following you.

      Voting up and sharing

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Wow, great job! This poem was perfect! Thank you for sharing! Up+ and sharing!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Thank you dear one,

      You are so kind. Happy 25,185 days old!!! Such a baby still.

      You make me smile.

      In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      It was like I was walking with the victim. Very alive and real. Thank you.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Faith Reaper..Sorry to hear of your mother's plight, and your heartache..I know there are no words that can be said to make the pain go away..this is why I started writing, a form of therapy..and getting rid of years of guilt..to be explained later...You have been missed, glad you are back at the " keys "..Glad you like my writes..it's as I see life..through my " cracked rose coloured glasses "..Life is a gift, it is up to us what we do with it...have a wonderful Friday...oh, today I am 25,185 days old...

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Wow kj force,

      This is a force of a hub no doubt!

      I am so sorry dear one, as I have been away. My sweet mother, who is almost 84, has been very ill, but God is healing her each and every day. Please forgive me for not being able to comment in a while.

      This just popped up just now, and I thought, I am going to read and comment right now too!!!

      Wow, again, I must say I love your style, as you just cut right to the chase dear one. Excellent right and full of so much truth to say the least, I am sure for a lot. Yep. those illusions are rough . . . I can imagine.

      I told myself that I was going to do a little reading and commenting tonight, and I am glad I did. I know I have missed much in these last few days, but I will try my best to catch up to all's powerful write's here.

      Voted Way Up and sharing

      In His Love Always, Faith Reaper