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Emotional Thoughts Of You

Updated on April 16, 2012
The magic of the fireflies
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so gentle and submissive
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entwined as one
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You know who you are.

The dandelion clock floats gently on the summer breeze

As your voice captivates my attention with whispers

Like the fire fly on a damp summer evening


My eyes are wide shut, and yet

I can see the magic gently offered and overflowing

From those eyes, lingering pools of ecstasy


With feather like touch your fingers reach my cheek

I can feel your hot breath gently on my face

And I am ready to surrender to your charms


I turn my face for you to kiss my neck

Shivers like the cold biting wind stir in my loins

the sensation of your lips are like woven silk


The firmness of your finger tips gently caress my soul

And feel not obliged to touch my flesh

That is cradled so strongly between your loving arms


With full abandonment, my body lays besides yours

The beat of your heart secures my knowledge

Of a love that will never falter, never fear


For with my waking breath I surrender who I am

For the power of your love is every breath I breathe

And death shall never separate our sorrow.

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    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      5 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Thank you so much Kim for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment. x

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      ocfireflies 

      5 years ago from North Carolina

      I am a lightenin' bug nut so I was thrilled when I came across your poem. Your poem just oozes with sensuality. Very much enjoyed.

      ocfireflies aka Kim

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      Maria Jordan 

      6 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Remember that you wrote this. Always remember the woman you are.

      Voted 'oh so' BEAUTIFUL, my Sista. Love, Maria

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      mckbirdbks 

      6 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Very nice, peaceful and warm.

    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi Lesley, thank you for the lovely comment hunnie. Your support and kind words move the mountains in my soul. :)

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      Movie Master 

      6 years ago from United Kingdom

      So very beautiful, romantic and sensual....

      Fabulous Net, best wishes Lesley

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      Annette Donaldson 

      6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      LABrashear

      carthorse

      Ruby

      Peg

      Joyce

      fjohn

      Pamela

      Thank you all so kindly for stopping by to show me some support. Without the kindness of friends like you, I would not still be writing and trying to perfect my art. You are all very much appreciated. See you over the page. Net:)

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      Pamela Oglesby 

      6 years ago from Sunny Florida

      This romantic poem is hot, hot, hot. I think it was beautifully written.

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      fjohn 

      6 years ago from india

      your poem has stolen my heart... its some where in your home town,kindly get me back...

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      Joyce Haragsim 

      6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Net, this poem is so beautiful. I love it and hopefully you are the lady this is about. Voted up and awesome, Joyce.

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      Peg Cole 

      6 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      This lovely poem had the right combination of mystery, romance and etheric quality. I really love the last lines:

      "For the power of your love is every breath I breathe

      And death shall never separate our sorrow."

      Beautiful.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is so beautiful. Lucky man..Cheers..

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      carthorse 

      6 years ago

      Loved your poem , made me feel 18 again.

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      LABrashear 

      6 years ago from My Perfect Place, USA

      Beautiful, romantic, sensual...so many words that have already been used, but are so spot-on. Wonderful words. Voted up!

    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi Ruby, thanks for the visit. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. :)

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      Annette Donaldson 

      6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      loveofnight, thank you so much for reading my little attempt to write poetry. You are very welcome to my little space in Hub Land. :)

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      Maree Michael Martin 

      6 years ago from Northwest Washington on an Island

      Very moving, gave me goosebumps. Love the fireflies. I love poems, this is so caring.

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      loveofnight 

      6 years ago from Baltimore, Maryland

      A lovely poem indeed, I look forward to reading more of your work.

    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hi hunnie, thank you for your loving support once more. I think with your insight you will guess who this is written for. :)

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      Carolee Samuda 

      6 years ago from Jamaica

      Such a beautiful poem. So romantic and sensuous. Really nice. I loved it.

    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Jamie, thank you for stopping by to leave me such a lovely encouraging comment. It is truly appreciated.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 

      6 years ago from Reno NV

      This is very romantic, and wonderful...thank you. Jamie

    • thebluestar profile imageAUTHOR

      Annette Donaldson 

      6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Wow Wayne, that was quick. Thank you for being the first to read my little attempt at poetry. Great to see you my friend. :)

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      Wayne Brown 

      6 years ago from Texas

      A very romantic and sensual write...thanks much for sharing. WB

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